Winning Her

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A/N: Hi there. I hope you all don't hate me, and if you do the news you are about to read might help with that. So let me just be honest with you. I lost the motivation to continue this story. But today, on my bus ride home, I got a notification that someone had commented on one of my chapters. I was like 'Ok cool, I want to go back and reread the story.' So I did. In all honesty I am mad at myself. How could I just leave the story unfinished? Like I never updated. So here I am to hopefully write a couple more chapters to end this story for you. I really hope you like it, and please comment and like this story. If you are interested in reading more of my works, I am currently writing a Tris and Four 'No War' story called 'Being Dauntless.' Thanks so much! 


Tobias POV 

I woke up with a massive head ache. I have cried myself to sleep for three days in a row. I never realized that crying so hard gave you such a bad head ache. I miss Tris so much. I would do anything just to see her face again. I sat up and looked around it seems that my room had been cleaned while I was sleeping. I stood and put my sweatshirt on. I have been in sweats since the break up. I walked out of my room, needing food. I ran into Zeke on my walk to the kitchen.

"Woah, hey there buddy." He smiled.

"Hey." I sniffed.

"Dude you need to talk to Tris man." He said patting my shoulder. 

"I don't know." I continued my walk to the kitchen. He followed and we sat down at the island. 

"She's not good." He looked down.

"Really?" I asked worried.

"Dude she quit. Said her dad wanted her to move back in. She told Shauna that she has nothing. No fight anymore. She moves in a couple of days. Shauna said that she had been wearing the same clothes for two days, and won't leave her room." He explained.

"She can't move." I said standing.

"Where are you going?" He asked.

"To get the love of my life back." I yelled walking out. I didn't care if I looked like shit. She can't leave. She's mine. She completes me. I need her back. I have to win her back. I have to. I would die if I didn't. I ran. With everything in me, I ran to her apartment. I knocked on the door. Shauna answered and frowned when she saw me. 

"In her room." She let me in. I walked passed her and into her room.

"Shauna please, I'm really not hungry." Tris whined. 

"It's me." I said quietly. She looked up surprised.

"Tobias, what are you doing here?" She asked.

"You can't leave." I protested.

"How did you know?"

"Zeke. He knows everything. Tris please don't go. Move in with us, we don't have to be together if you don't want. Please just don't leave. I need you." 

"Do you want to be together?" 

"Yes. I am so in love with you and I can't get you out of my head. I need you in my life and if you don't want to be with me, then being friends is going to have to be ok. Because Tris Prior I can't live without you." I cried. 

"Tobias" She wiped my tears. 

"Tris please, please don't leave me." I whispered. 

"Tobias I would never leave." She whispered pulling me closer. I wrapped my arms around her waist. 

"I love you." I smiled.

"I love you too." She smiled. "I guess you did it." She laughed.

"Did what?" I asked.

"Won me back." She smirked. "Your not the only one who talks to Zeke." She said scooting closer. 

"Yeah, I knew I could." I smirked. She hit my arm playfully. "Can I ask you a question?" I asked.

"Of course." She answered.

"Can I kiss you now." 

"I thought you would never ask." She rushed to my lap and pressed her lips to mine. I was completed when she touched me. My world was back to normal. She pulled away smiling.

"I want it." She smiled.

"Want what?" I asked.

"Your last name." She blushed.

"Take it baby girl, it sounds great with your name." I flirted. She blushed a deeper shade of pink and laughed. "Are you serious, you want to do this?" I asked.

"Being away from you showed me that I can't be without. I want to marry you Tobias. I want to be yours forever." She gushed. 

"I love you." I smiled.

"I love you too." 

I did it. I won my Tris back. 


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