Marshall awkward shyness..
Okay I don't care for this too much in these fanfic's. They make Marshall all bashful and shy so when he opens his mouth and says something it's usually stupid or extremely cheesy. For one I don't picture Marshall being Shy or Awkward. I feel as though he's probably a straight shooter and doesn't particularly mind telling you what he's thinking no matter how blunt he may sound. I mean he might be nervous at first but please don't make him that way through the entire story.
So if he's going to tell 7-eleven girl that he likes her or even that he loves her I feel as though he'll cut to the chase like.
Marshall: Hey so, I think your a pretty wonderful girl and I think i'm really starting to like you.
or
Slim Shady: Your really different from these other goldigging hoes..wanna go steady?
LOL!! xD Okay maybe not the second one but you get the point! xD
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Eminem story rant
FanfictionA story about the many problems with eminem fanfictions. :D I know some of these have probably already been addressed but I would like to readress them in a calm and orderly fashion which will probably not be orderly or fashionable...Here we go!