my dream come true

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"would u like my 2 get ur bags sweetheart?" he says in a cheerful voice. i stand there studying him and his car. he cocks his head 2 the side"sweetie r u ok?" he says in a conserned voice. i quickly jump out of my trance"uhh yeah sorry!" i say rushing 2 recover the minutes lost."OK may i come in and get ur bags then?"."uhh yes think u." i studer trying not 2 sound like a dofis."fallow me."."as u wish." i giggle at his comment. i lead him into my room."uhh nice room..." he says trying 2 hide the fact that hes lieing."thx..." i say sarcastically. we get in the car i c a women sitting play what seems 2 b Bejeweled she looks at me and smiles"y hello,Hakeru right?"."yes!" i respond she is whareing a shirt that says shine down on it with hawks around it and torn jeans. she has brown eyes with blond hair. i think her and my mom r at war in beautiy "well ur very very pretty!" she says in a nice voice."thx u r 2." i respond as i study her she smiles and gives me a hug and it seem like it would b hard sence shes in a car with a seat belt but she dose this with no problem

WHAT DID U THINK IS IT OK OR AM I JUST PLAIN BAD AT WRITING????

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