#FiftyShadesOfMax #Part23
Locking the door in the bathroom i stay there. Huddle on the floor, my ass hurts my heart is broken and i still didnt get to wear my dress out. so far this night fucking sucks. All i want is to go home to my home in london but i know the next best thing. mommas house. if i could call her to come get me i would but my bag and cellphone are in the room.. and i am not going in there.. max is banging on the door but there is no way i'm going to speak to him or even let him in.. how could he spank me. Over a freaking dress.. this is bullshit.. I am not his sub .. hell somedays i am not sure i am even his girlfriend.. the bangs stop and then theres voices .. i hear max talking to jay and tom.. then theres a softer knock at the door " Hey red, could i come in " Jay says and as i wipe some tears from my eyes .. " No" I whipser and he knocks again softly " red Please let me in " a little louder i say " no" again and rub my eyes .. my make up is ruined and my ass still hurts " Please Little red " He says and i feel the tears rolling down my cheeks again " NO Jay Go away " I Scream as i grab a towel to cry into. the bangs have returned " Carrol Please let me in " max screams but i ignore him and hold the towel tighter.
I sit in the bathroom for what feels like hours i can still hear max in the rom but now everyone is in there . kasy is yelling at max crystal is trying to talk me out of the bathroom but i am not moving until the room is empty and i can get my stuff and leave..
" Carrol Open the door or i am going to call your mom " Crystal says softly " Do it i want my mom i want to go to my moms house i never want to see max again EVER" I Scream as i lay my head on the toilet lead. " Ok I'll call moma " crystal says .. i hear max telling her no and kasy yelling more but i am not moving no a inch until i have to.. a few moments later crystal is back at the door " mom said that she will be here to get you in just a bit. " Crystal say softly " If max leaves ill come out " I Say .. I hear max tell crystal " like hell" but Tom talks him into a walk.. " the cost is clear little red" jay says at the door and i push to my feet and walk to the door. peaking out i see max is gone but everyone is still here.. everyone expt max and tom.. " what happen " crystal as hugging me the moment i step out of the bathroom. I whisper that he spanked me hard in her ear and she blinks at me " What the fuck " she says and goes over to tell Kasy the samething " You are kidding me " kasy says and shakes her head " Fuck that shit.. I am going to moma's house with you " Kasy says and jay looks crushed" But why " he askes and she turns to him waving her finger at his face" Becouse your Friend hurt my friend and i am sorry Friends stick together.. " she rolls her eyes and smiles at him " I'll be back i am getting my stuff " she says as she leaves with jay trailing behind her begging her to stay.. Nathan is watching crystal waiting for her to say something " Ohh you best bet i am going too nathan.. Nobody hurts my Carebear.." she rolls her eyes and helps me get my stuff together.. nathan doesnt bother trying to talk her out of it..
once all my things our together crystals sweeps me out of the room and down to the lobby. " moma said she would be in dads grey car " Crystal says as we take a seat i nthe lobby my ass hurts to sit, really hurts." you can stay crystal i know how much you like Nathan.." I Whisper and she smirks .. " Its ok. He texted me and told me that i should be with you and that he will be there for me no mater what" she says with a smile.. Kasy joins us just as my mom comes running into the lobby " ohh Carrol " She says hugging me tightly " Hello moma " I whisper hugging her tight.. Crystal and kasy join in the hug and we start to walk out as max walks in.. walking right towards me crystal and kasy step between us " Carrol baby " He whispers as he reaches for me and i back up.. my mom steps up and stares at him " YOU HURT MY DAUGHTER" She screams as she smacks him hard ..
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Fifty Shades of Max
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