date night

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merida did love hiccup , but lately she has realised that they dont act like jack and punzie do , they arnt as romantic , and hiccup wont take the reins and ask her on a romantic date , or kiss her , or even hold her hands on most days , and frenkly she was sick of it , it was annoying seeing her bestfriend with jack like that , didnt she deseve that? , of course she did ,

whalst in florida , merida wanted to make the most of it , she had decided to do something romantic with hiccup , there was a really nice resterrant down the road from the hotel called "the bear and the bow" and merida really liked it , so she went to see what it ewas like

"hello las" she said in a rich scottish accent to a bar tender

"hello , would you like a drink" she said

"no thank you , i was wondering if that table is freee to book" merida said pointing to a table on the balchany over looking the beach

"yes it is... tonight would you like it?" she girl asked

"if thats alright , for about 7, probably till half 9"merida comformed

"thats early .. thinking about doing anything else later " the girl said suggestivly

"we will see" merida smirked and walked of

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hiccup had gone to play basketball with flynn and jack out side , punzie had come and sat on a bench and listened to music

"hey , jack do you love punzie" hiccup asked dropping the ball and looking at him

jack , who was out of breath , put his hands on his kneees and caught his breath ,

"why do you ask?" jack says looking up at this boy , who when they first met was a skinny boy with acne and short hair , and now was muscler , and had thick black hair that hung just before his ears , " i see the way she looks at you .... merida never looks at like that "

hiccup said looking down at his feet , despite his looks, he was still very insicure , he was the opposite to his brother , flynn was confident he could have anyone , and hiccup doesnt think his own girlfirnf diesnt like him , flynn chuckled and went to sit by rapunzel ,

"yes , i love rapunzel , and merida loves you.... just because she doesnt show it , doesnt mean its not there" jack said looking over at his girl

"how do you know she loves you to though" hhiccup said putting a hand through his hair

"you just know , everything thats happened , you just know man " jack said walking over to punzie and kissing her , taking his by supprise

"you swaety......." she said leaning back

"now so are you" he said wiping a hand on her face

biting her tougn , punzie smiled

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back at the hotel , merida was sat on her bed , and as soon as puzie walked in , merida ran to her

"i need help , you help , " she said ,manicly

"with" punzie asked

"im going on a date with hic , and he doesnt know , text jack and tell him to tell hiccup to dress up , then help me dress up" she said going through rapunzels luggage

punzie got out her phone and did what was asked

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jacks phone pinged when they wew sat around talking

" its punzs" he said reading it

he smiled to him self and showd flynn , they pushed hiccup on the ed and wernt to the wardrobe , ignoring his questionsd about what was happening

jack found a suit , and through it at hiccup and told him to put it on

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punzie found a dress i really pretty punk one with a leather tourso , and chech plaid , red on the skirt , and some , heels with knetting up the the anchle on top , and bows on the side , in black , punzie striahtened her hair , but not to much , not so it looks to fake , it was still wavey

and some winged eye liner to finish her of

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hiccups suit looked amazing , , it was black , no w=wait coat , and a plain wihte suit , and a tie with grey striped on , his hair was kind of messly, but he still looked good , punzie walked merida to the place , and text jack so hiccup would come , 5 minuest , hiccup showed up , and punzie left ,

hiccup was bearth taken when merida stood up to meet him , as was merida , she has never seen hiccup so handsome , they both sat down

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im going to skip the diloge date , because it bores me , they sat and talked , and had food , and a bit of wine

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and at kast the date came to an end , and being the gentleman he is , hiccup paid , they stood up and left the resterrant , hand in hand , walking down the road they came ot a ally , lit ip by street lamps , they were walking when hiccup turned to merida , smiled and allk of a sudden his lips came crashing in to hers , it was all he had been thinking about doing , and as normal, they got a bit to much intot the kill and hiccup got a bit to exsited , "lets finish this at the hotel" merida smiled against him , hiccup smirked and started to walk quicked , merida got her phone out and text punzie

"get out out room , me AND hiccup are coming back TOGETHER"

and caught up with hiccup , they got back to the room and could hear jack and punzie laughing , smiling they crashed through the dloor into their empty room , the other room went silent ... merida stoped for a moment

"ignore them" hicccup said taking merida in his arms , and such , began the night of bliss ,

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yea , im not writing a sex scene , if you want that go read anyone one , then come back , go read my jackunzel drabbles and swap people xD

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sorry i havnt updated in ages im really ill and lifes going shit... but that doesnt matter , theres alot of spelling mistakes , because its 11pm hear ,and ita pitch black , and my light doesnt work , so im using rhe light from the laptop to see my key pad, not going so well , and i cant be asked with spell check ,, enjoy the chpter 




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