Seraph of the End X Reader

Mixing Worlds

Konich everyone my name is Shizuko aka Shi-Chan. HOL UP, OMG 103 READS! I know it's not that big of a deal but thank you to anyone who reads this shit! This is where something happens and there's a few weird parts but if it gets annoying I will quickly delete it all so just tell me. Anyway let's go!
(Y/n)'s PoV

The tornado had sucked us up and then everything went black.
Author's PoV (don't worry, I got you.)
(Y/n) and everyone else had blacked out and then they awoke to a bright light shining like a star in your face. Mika and (Y/n) saw the light get closer and closer until the light enveloped everyone. Then they suddenly saw broken walls and cracks in the windows. "Where are we?" (Y/n) says.
Your PoV

"Where are we?" You ask, "I don't know." Mika responds, then you see Yuuchiro, Shinoa, Yoichi, and Kimizuki. (Plus you two would be six of you.) Then you see the other four open their eyes. "Where the hell are we?" Yuuchiro asks. "Does it look like we would know?" You say with an annoyed expression. Then a loud sound emits, "Hello, you may be wondering where you are but you'll find out soon enough. Here you will dig through everyone else's secrets, thoughts, and other things in order to find a few pieces of my puzzle and put them together. Oh and I placed false memories in them too, so I hope you know everyone well." Then in a flash you see a ghost, it's a ten year old girl with black hair and cyan colored eyes, she smiles. "We will also give you a limited amount of hints. Also, you must complete this or you will die here. There are eight puzzle pieces scattered throughout hundereds of memories." She says before you see a number in front of you. Your number is thirteen, the ghost girl smiles at you, "I like you, so you have three extra helpers or savers." She said, you smile and she smiles back. Then she disappears, you are all alone then it's time for you to look through memories.

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