Shes mine(louis tomlinson fanfic)

chapter 3

I was past out for hours till harrywoke me up his cold lips kissed my forehead are you ok love

I nodded saying yeah I'm fine he touched my neck and he touched my neck and I winced in pain it hurt

harryspov

she is so beautiful I can't get her out of my mind when I touched her neck I saw a bite who ever did that ill kill!... Kayla who did this to you i said. nniall she said quitly.

kaylaspov

Harry asked mebwho bit me and I quitly said niall I was so scared of what he's going to do after I said niall a second later Harry.bursted out the door screaming NIALL JAMES HORAN!!!! he found niall eating a sandwich and harry punched him sqaire in the face what was that for he said for biteing Kayla you new we weren't suppose to and you did anyway Harry screamed I just can't resist its the best blood I've ever tasted. Harry stomped of and I came down stairs to go watch TV on the coutch. after 5 mins. of watching teen wolf Louis came in and said scootch in a childish/playfully voice I couldint help but laugh Louis you are truly amazing I said laughing and why is that he said crossing his arms becouse ur just like me said while winking nope Im the one and onily oh ok I said laughing. ok ready ready for what we are have a contest ok how bout laughing. contest who evrler laughs. is out ok.l and if you win you get to sleep alone but if I win you have to sleep with me he said while smirking deal ok so no one laughed. so far through 5 mins of the game but then he started tickiling. me. and I couldint. help my self with blurted out laughing that ment. I had to sleep with Louis.

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