Lineage(Star Wars Fanfiction Rey X Finn

Chapter 3- Rey's surprise

Luke was juststaring at me like he was letting me keep the lightsaber that has been in his family for a long time I told myself.

"Where did you get that lightsaber Rey" he said he in a low voice and i said " i was drawn to it on takadona and i saw memories of a lava planet and all different types of stuff and how do you know my name"

"Because Rey I am your father and I can sense in you that you have feelings for someone", I was shocked that luke could know who I had feelings for.
"So this Finn is he kind" he asked me, it felt weird talking to my father after he abandoned me on jakku.
Then I felt something because just then a ship was landing near the millenium falcon and it was an x-wing and in it was Finn my heart just had butterflies in it.
I went to hug him then out of no where his lips press on to mine and I then know that this man is the one I would spent the rest of my life with. I just couldn't believe finn was here and that i kissed him i was just so embarrased that my cheeks blushed so red that I couldn't believe it myself. I then sat down with finn and asked how he got the x-wing to get here and he told me of how poe gave it to him since he could now use the force it seems he was related to some other great jedi but who was the question.

I just couldn't believe rey would kiss me and then after I told her how I put the force mind trick on poe she was just so amazed to see me and whispered to me "you can hold my hand now". I was still so sad that Han Solo was butchered by his own son the anger I was feeling was infinite that I just wanted to kill ben for what he had coming for him. The next time I laid eyes on kylo ren I would focus my sights on him and destroy him and make him pay for all the chaos he has wrought on the galaxy. These thoughts were not my own though they were the thoughts of the dark side and I just kept hearing this voice that I needed to trust the force,I could feel a familar presence about him I then realised he was my grandfather who was unknown then the voice in a low tone which I could make out said that the luke would explain all.

That night finn and I slept for the first time in quite a while and I was glad and afraid at the same time for some reason because I was glad to get at least some sleep, but the fear was from a nightmare i had I kept experiencing the vision from luke's lightsaber over and over like the force was showing it to me for some reason and I had to meditate to find the answer to all my problems. I meditated and the force showed me more than I could imagine the force showed me great battles from the past and it showed me battles that were to come. It showed me from the earliest battles of tython to the battle i just fought and it was then I understood what maz kanata had said they only fight has been against the dark side. I woke from my meditation and when i returned to finn he was up panting and i asked him what the matter was and he said to me " just a bad dream of when I was still in the first order i am okay just still want to run away from everything" i knew where finn was coming from because a long time ago i wanted to run away from everything, until unkar plutt stopped me and convinced me to stay as a scavenger and maybe luck might cone my way and for once he was part right. If i saw him again i would thank him for making me stay and i actually appreciated that coz without being a scavenger i wouldn't know any thing about technology or alien languages.
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