Luis coronel the sequel [COMPLETED]

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"No trace of her mr. Coronel." The officer said as it's just a new day with the same old information.

"No video clips of her around here?" I say much calmer then I expected.

"We've seen them, but there's seems to be nothing since it's dark" the officer says. I nod and rub my face. Those past few days I've been trying to get my self off of the drinking and talk more to the kids. Something they told me was they put a picture of her in everywhere... Without me.

"Alright please give me a call if there anything new" I say as I hang up and throw the phone. My eyes are filled with tears once again and I'm in the floor crying like a baby with his milk bottle.

Nayeli's POV

I woke up. Looking at my surroundings everything looked unfamiliar. Trying to move but can't because I am tied up feet, hand and my mouth is cover with some kind of cloth. I look around freaking out a bit. As I look to my side I see Becky... Becky? What is she doing here. I start to talk but all you could here is mumbles. My eyes start to tear up where the hell am I? Where the hell are my kids? Are they safe? Is Luis safe?. Becky slowly open her eyes and looked at me. Her eyes are red... Blood shot red like she's been crying. Her hair is messy also her makeup. As I look at her the door behind her opens light coming through it. I hear a man chuckle and a girl also.

"Look who's awake! Sleeping beauty!" Oh my god! I- I thought he was dead!. The lights turn on and I groan at the pain feeling in my eyes.

"Surprise!" He says waving his heads up in the air. I look to his side a girl... Adeline... Why do they want? Might as well kill me now..

I look to see Becky with her head low not daring to look up.

"Did you miss me Nayeli?" Rodrigo asks. We gross me out... Stupid bastard. His hurt me in a million ways. I glare at him and Adeline just chuckle.

"I told you I'd get my revenge" she says as she walk up to me and bent down my height.

"You know what our plan?" Rodrigo asks. I just glare at him.

"Killing you love ones in front of your own eyes... Starting of with you precious kids then your parents and then the others! Oh wait let's not forget Luis" my whole world is falling apart. Tears start to form in my eyes and I cried my heart out at the words he say. He chuckles as Adeline looked disturbed.

"I thought you said we were not going to-"

"Well now we are" he says as all of a sudden everything blacks out..

Luis POV

"What do you mean?!!"

"Luis! Nun of the four are here! We've called the police they're looking for them!" Gerardo yelled from the other side of the phone. I turn off the phone and and got all my belongings. If anything happens to my kids I will kill myself. Going to the police station I tell them right away and like always they're so calm and tell me to wait. They start doing some investigation on where they were the last time and if maybe they had a plan to escape.

"No sir, we went to a public library for a bit then after maybe a few minutes I couldn't find them anywhere..." Gerardo said as the police officer nods.

"What library was it?" The officer says.

"San Diego public library" Gerardo says.

"Alright we are going to go over there ask for some tapes to see if they ran away or maybe some one kidnapped them" the officer says as we both nod. We got up quickly and head off.

When we got there the officer went where they check the tapes of he streets and everything that happens.

"Alright.. Can you show us the tape of today of this morning at 10am through 12am" the office says as the security nods and go's on the computer.

"There you go" the security says as we look at the video. The tape starts off normal. Gerardo and the kids go in the library then nothing happens after a few minutes the kids are being held by a four man. Divina is trying get out of his grip as well as Jr.

"Someone kidnapped them... Which its also possible that they have you wife also" he says as I get worried. Gerardo looks at me worried as I let a tear slip.

"We need to find them! I won't stand if I see my kids or wife hurt" the officer nods. As we see the rest of the clip we see that they get in a black truck. He officer paused the video and zoom in the number plate.

He wrote it down in a paper.

"Alight we have one clue! Now we need to go back to the station and see where this car is and we might have a clue on where they're at. I nod as we go back to the station. After hours and hours if investigating they finally found where they are.

"They're in Los Angeles" one of the police say to another.

"Is that where you found the truck?"

"Yes" the other says. The officer comes to us with a huge smile.

"We found where they are! Now what we need to do is get there by tonight so we might as well head now" he says as me and Gerardo nod. We get thing ready and head off to Los Angeles. I just hope they're good by when we get there.

Hello! How's everyone? Sorry it took me so long to update I'm truly sorry:( but guess what? I'm almost finished with this story:( it coming an end:(((

Since this story is coming to and end I am thinking to write another story since you guys deserve it for always supporting me through this story! What would you guys like?

Action?
Love story?
Scary? (Even tho I'm not good at it lol)
Or anything else you have in mind?

Also what celebrity would you like?
G-Eazy
Justin Bieber
Niall Horan
Liam Payne
Louis Tomlinson
Harry Styles 
Luis Coronel
Prince Royce
Zac Efron
Chace Crawford
Luke Hemmings

Idk, You name them. Once I pick what I feel that you'll like I'll tell you guys.

Please comment on what you think about a new story and vote for this chapter! Thank you loves! Love ya xoxo