Luis coronel the sequel [COMPLETED]

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He looks at me with evil look as I stand there frozen in my spot.

"Do you really think you'd get away with it?" He says as I stand there not able to do anything.

"Oh Nayeli..." He laughs as he walks around me. All of a sudden he pushes me to the wall. I groan as my back hits the wall really hard. I didn't get time to react once again as he pushes me up from the ground.

"I would kill you now, but where's the fun in that? I want to see your whole family see how you suffer in pain" he lets go of my neck as I cough.

"Get over it!" I say as I slap my hands on my thighs. Rodrigo looks glares at me.

"Yes, we dated. You cheat on me. That's was years ago before I even met Luis" I say as Rodrigo pushed me to the wall.

"Keep in that little head of yours that I don't care. You replaced me right away" I can't believe him. His a psychopath. Just as he about to talk he stops himself and looks around the garage letting me go as I fall to the ground to cough.

"He's here, but his not alone. Damn it!" He says.

"Where the fuck is Adeline!?!" Rodrigo says with anger in his voice. I'm happy at the thought that Luis finally found us, but i knew this was not over yet.

"Untie you fucking kids" Rodrigo say as I nod and run to the kids saying to each and one of them that when Rodrigo isn't around to escape the house or get help. Uniting Becky I told her to go with the kids and also get help. Once I untie them Rodrigo grabs me by the arms and pulls me inside the house with the kids and Becky behind.

"Get in the basement. Right now or I'll kill one of you!" We all look at each other and obeyed. Once we were at he bottom of the basement we closed the door and locked it.

"Mom, I'm scared" Alex say as he hugs me. I hug him back missing my kids so much.

"Don't worry. Dad going to save us all ok." I say as they all hug me. After a few more minutes we hear a door slam open. I smile knowing they will get Rodrigo and Adeline soon. Seconds later Rodrigo's comes with Adeline pulling her by the hair, she seem in pain. He locked the door and came down with us. He opened a hidden door behind a bookcase.

"All of you get the fuck in here!" He whispers yells.

"Or I'll kill you all" we all move slowly as we hear footsteps upstairs. We go down a few steps again and once everyone was down Rodrigo locked the door and turn in the lights. There was a couches a big flat screen TV and I'm guess by the shape, color and smell weed in a little corner. As we heard footsteps up in the basement Rodrigo put a finger on top of his mouth to keep quiet. I was full of fear of what might Rodrigo might do to my kids or me. We hear movement on top and I am praying that they find the secret door. After a few seconds Rodrigo takes out a knife which make me gasp really loud.

"Shut the fuck up or your kids will be kill right before you fucking e-" the door slams opened to reveal polices with there guns ready. I smile knowing we are finally ok and not in danger. They grab Rodrigo right away and take him up. Rodrigo tried to fight to get out of hold, but with two strong polices holding him he couldn't.

"Are you all ok? Did he hurt any of you?" Adeline was on the floor holding her stomach.

"We are all ok except for her... She's bleeding" I say as I run to her and look at where Rodrigo stabbed her. She looked at me and mouth sorry as she closed her eyes.

"We need ambulance! Now" I say as the police comes to Adeline and helps her up going up the house and outside with everyone of us behind. I saw Luis pacing back and forth as the kids run to him and hug him. After they hug he sees me and I run up to him.

"Oh fuck. I missed you so much. I was sick worried" he say as he hugs me tight. I let the tears I've been holding in for as long as I know. We stay like this for a couple of more minutes until we kiss and let go of each other.

"Becky was here too?" He asks as I nod. She was standing beside the police car.

"I'll be back in a bit" I say as I walk to Becky as she looks down at her feet. She looks up at me as I just hugged her.

"Thank you for nothing harming my kids" I say as she sighs.

"I'm sorry for being in it at first. I was jealous you could say" she says as I smile.

"It's ok we all make mistakes" I say with a faint smile.

**
One month later

"Rodrigo Mendoza will be jailed for the rest of his life for raping a eighteen year old girl, kidnapping Nayeli Coronel, Rebecca Gomez, Luis Jr. Coronel, Divina Coronel, Emily Coronel and Alex Coronel also for killing Adeline Idalie, vandalizing the coroners home and faking his death" the judge says as court ends and Luis and I hug knowing it's all over. No more danger. It's a fresh page into our world. As we walk out of court hand and hand I think about how we have had a lot of ups and downs mostly downs, but that's what made out relationship stronger then ever. Now. Now we have a beautiful house our kids have taken therapy same as I and we are all back as it was... A happy strong family.

"I love you" he says.

"I love you forever and always"

The end.

Did you guys liked it? Did you like my whole story? Did you like the ending? I feel like it was lame lol.

Ok so about a new story I do plan on having a new story for you guys, but the problem is I kinda don't want to do Luis, don't get me wrong I love him, but I can't find any story ideas for him. I do have some other artist in option tho like.

Prince Royce
G- eazy
Maluma
Justin Bieber
Harry styles

I actually have to stories of G- Eazy so if you want me to publish then I'll do it. Once is where he has a daughter but he doesn't know and the mother doesn't want him to know until one day we sees her and his daughter and other one his a fuckboy. Lol.

Ok, so comment and vote if you want any of the artist from top or do you guys want any females like

Kendall Jenner
Selena Gomez
Etc.

Comment!

Well this is it and thank you guys for walking with me to this journey and supporting me giving me all those votes and comments. I'm happy that some of you like this book and I hope you guys keep on supporting me the through other books. Love you guys so much and see you next time xxx.