Luis coronel the sequel [COMPLETED]

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Ok, so I'll be telling you who my character for my upcoming
Story is:) and before I start there's going to be a new side
To one of the characters so stay tune:)
-B

Days later

After driving 7 hours back to San Diego we stop at a McDonald's before we head back home. Unfortunately Bebe couldn't come with us because doña Thelma got sick with high temperature so he stayed. My parent and sisters were sad because I was leaving mostly my mom since she the most sensitive from the family.

"Mom, how do you think dad will react?" Emily asks me as we were sitting on a table to eat out food.

"I have no clue sunshine" I say.

There was silence after that. When we got done eating we went back to the car and Jr took the car since he was begging me for. Once we got home we got our luggage out and headed for the door. I got my key out and opened the door for my surprise it was clean no broken things we went further the house when we heard footstep coming from upstairs.

"Who's there?!?" I heard Luis say.

"Us" I say as I made a weird expression.

I went upstairs wondering if he heard me or not. As I saw him walking towards me he pulled my arm in a harsh way towards our room. As he closed the door he pushed me to the floor. What the hell was wrong with him? He never acting like this towards me or anyone. He locked the door I was getting terrified by his action as to right now.

He grabbed both of my arms with force and pulled me towards him.

"Why the fuck did you leave?!?" He says he smelled like alcohol... A lot. I let tears roll down my face because he was hurting me.

"Because you cheated on me.... I was fucking mad at you I didn't want to be in the same god damn roof as you neither did my kids!!!" I say screaming and try to get out if his grip.

"Don't fucking raise you voice at me.. You fucking bitch!!" He say as he tighten more his hand on my arms.

"You're hurting me Luis!!!!" I say as I shut my eyes and with all my force I pushed him back almost falling but he grabbed him self in the vanity. I made my way to the door but he grabbed me and pushes me down to the floor as he hovers over me.

I heard my kids banging on the door so Luis would open it, but Luis didn't listen. All of a sudden Luis slaps me on the cheek it started to burn. I cried even harder. I couldn't let my kids live like this with us I don't want them to see the really dark side of Luis.

Luis stood up as I covered my face and turned to a side as I cried.

"Don't ever leave or it will me worse" was the last few words before he left the room.

He opened the door as the kids stood there horrified of there father. Luis left the house and then my kids came in the room and help me sit up. I saw tears on each and one of them.

"I'm so sorry" I say with tears in my face.

"Who is he?" Divina says with shaky voice.

"I don't want you guys living like this" I say as I looked at my legs with tears.

I felt warm hugs from my kids as we all cried. I never imagine this side of Luis or never in my life I thought he would lay a hand on me I am scared of him.

After a few minutes I told the kids to go somewhere forget about earlier but they refuse to leave me here alone I told them I was fine as long as Luis didn't hit me again but they still refuse they just told me they would be in there rooms so I just nodded to them. They left a few minutes ago I walked towards my vanity and looked at myself I had a purple bruise on my left cheek it almost covered my whole cheek. Walking downstairs in the kitchen I hear the door open I was frighten of what Luis might do next. Knowing that he reached his limits with laying a finger at me I said that I will regret the rest of my life.

"I want the divorce!" I say as I look at him he seemed more calmed down and sober.

"No! You're not having it you're staying with me for the rest of your god damn life understood!?" He sounded mad.

"What the hell happen to you? You would never lay a hand of me!" I say as I looked at him as he got closer to me.

"Fuck it!" I say as I walk pass him and into the guest room where I would me staying.

As I laid on my bed I cried. This family is falling apart just because Becky she ruin our family. As my head ran through thoughts about me and Luis my eye slowly start to feel heavy that's when I slowly closed my eyes and fell to sleep.

Sorry guys for the short chapter:( so Luis is the bad guy.

Did you like Luis bad side? Or is he to rough? Or abusive?

Ok so the celebrity I'm using is *drum roll* KEVIN ORTIZ!!! Yay.

Hope you liked this and please comment and vote what you think:) thanks.