What Really Happens During a Comatose

+_+_+_Marissa_+_+_+ and +++The Beginning Part One+++

Sooo…I changed this part of the story- Marissa is a girl that's in a band, and is happy with her life. She’s a strong, sharp, and sassy woman. With sassiness always comes an enemy. -I felt that I needed to change that part.

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                                         +++The Beginning Part One+++

The grim reaper looked at his list and looked up. Before him was Marissa, the devil chose Marissa because of her sassiness and because he’s been dying to meet her. They’ve only really talked in Marissa’s dreams.

“So, how’s the tickets selling, you guys?” Marissa strolled into the studio with a cappuccino in her hand and she gave the other band mates their coffee too. Marissa wore a red and black plaid skirt and a tight black tank top with a red tie on it which had a skull with a bow design on it. Her black and purple hair was left uncombed so Marissa reached in her black purse for her blue comb and red brush and went to the bathroom to begin combing and brushing her long hair that reached down a few inches past her model-like shoulders.

After she was done fixing her long, soft, slightly wavy movie style hair she put on her L’Oreal black eye liner in a thin line on her eyelid. She extended the line a little past the side of her eyes to make it look cute with her almond shaped eyes.

She put three thick black coats of mascara on her eyelashes to define her dark shadowy blue eyes. Each time she put the brush on her eyelashes she blinked to get it on equally each time. Then she evenly put on red lipstick and took a piece of paper towel wet it and clamped her lips over it so she could reduce the redness of the lipstick. Then she rubbed her lips together and left the bathroom.

“Not so great. Not that many people like our band; at least we have some fans though right?” Matt sipped his coffee and played with the keys on his laptop. Matt is the singer of the band, the band was made up by Matt. The band was named by Jason, he plays bass guitar.

Jason was sitting on a chair on the other side of the room playing their new song ‘Love at First Sight’.

Marissa scanned the room searching for two other band members.“Where’s Jon and Sam?” she sat down on a couch beside Jason.

“They went to eat breakfast, they wanted to ask you if you wanted to come but you got here late.” Jason informed Marissa without looking up at her. Matt glanced at Jason and Jason looked up, Matt made a face.

“Oh.” She formed an ‘O’ with her mouth “Well they better be getting back soon because...” Marissa looked at her watch for the time “In 20 minutes I will go looking for them so you better let them know.” Marissa said with her sassy voice and walked out of the studio and sat on the porch outside. She took a cigarette out of her purse, lit it, and began to smoke it.

Jason mouthed ‘the ***** is back’ Matt nodded his head. They both went back to what they were doing in silence.

10 minutes later.

Matt and Jason heard a car roll up into the driveway. They both stared at each other. Marissa smiled as she saw Jon’s car roll up into the driveway with a bubbly Sam. Marissa dropped her cigarette to the floor and stomped on it and walked up to Jon’s car with her hand on her hip and a sway in her walk.

Jon got out of the car and noticed Marissa walking up. Jon plays the drums in the group. Jon had an Avenged Sevenfold band tee on with khaki cargo pants.