We stare at each other for another second or so before I break our awkward staring game we had just played. I walk to the counter where my order had been recently called. "$ 3.45" a miserable looking lady that looked only a few years older than me says in a grumpy tone. "Ok" I say in the most cheerfulest tone I could dig up while giving her the money. she practicly snatches the money and shoves the food to me.OK that was strange but I guess she was just having a bad day or something I think as I take a bite of my fluffy blueberry muffin that tasted amazing. Everything seemed fined except for the fact that I still felt him staring at me but then realise that I took the last table but either way it still didn't give him him to stare directly at me like that. Oh well
I give him a friendly wave as if I was inviting him to sit down with me. He ambles over to me shyly and sits down opposite from me. "Hi I'm Madison but just call me Maddie" I procliam "Hello I'm Louis but just call Louis" he exclaimes proudly and loudly. I giggle at him but confused on how he was shy one second and practicly jumping up and down the next.
Oh my God he has an accent! Is all I could think about for the 10 minutes of talking with him he became shy when I asked him what he liked to do with his time he said singing which I thought was cute.
I take a small cautious sip of my steaming hot chocolate and of course it burns my tongue I flinch back from the styrofoam cup while Louis is trying to fight off a chuckle but fails terriblely.
I smack the side of his head playfully which makes him laugh even more I roll my eyes playfully. "Where are you from?" I ask randomly. "Doncaster, England" he answers proudly with a toothy grin and with that he gets up from his seat and walks out the café.
I sit in my seat in disbelief as I watch him just walk like that. For the rest of my time at the café I finish my muffin and hot chocolate and write about Louis in my old leather notebook.
I know it's dorky to write about someone like this but we loved writing and this could turn out to be a good story. But to make this a good story I needed to see him again.
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Fiksi PenggemarMadison Golred is an quiet 18 year old girl with big dreams after college. Louis Tomlinson is 19 year old guy with no dreams but to be free after college; which his Nan forced him to get into. What happens when their two worlds collide?