Double Vision [boyxboy love story]

Author's Note/Writing Tips/Sequel Notice

Note (Thanks you note):

Okay, my name is BeastlyBeauty and this story I just wrote was written in mid July all the way to mid September.  It was my first teenage homosexual romance I ever written and I truly did enjoy writing it, more than any story I ever wrote.  I owe a lot of the book’s popularity to you guys, my fans.  My first fan, ColorMeRainbow, I owe my true first vote/comment.  I owe a friend, ON3PI3CE, to most of my inspiration.  But to thank everyone, it would take a long time.  So thank you, all of you.

Writing tips:

Yeah, I just see some stories not appreciated enough on this site and my story actually got a lot of buzz for a newcomer.  So writing tips:

                        Editing: Some stories aren’t written well so get an editor (go to the club and ask for one but in your headline advertisement add that it’s a boyxboy story).  If you don’t want that use the spell check that’s on the New Story page, or do what I do use Microsoft Word (it catches mistakes of all kinds and if wattpad messes up, just repost it since you saved it).  Or check it yourself.  Readers like a nice easy-readable story!

                        Need votes/comments: Ask other writers, I’m willing to comment and if I like it (and I am easily impressed) I’ll vote.  Don’t ask big writers, because they tend to have a lot of fans asking them to read and they will get stressed and leave a bitchy comment.  I’m not like that though so any worries.  Also, you can go to Share Your Story club.  People will read if you return the favor.  Also, need reads, just put in a real good summary.  Something that catches the eye: usually they start with an sneak peek (the cusp of excitement in your story).

                        Fans: Befriend writers, interact.  I fanned some of my writers, talked to them, and they fanned back, and even began to read my story!  Don’t fan people who won’t care, people with over 150 fans don’t say thanks for fanning (they rarely do) and don’t return the favor if you ask politely.  But if your desperate for fans, find people who always fan back, usually newcomers do so and some others do as well.

                        Writer’s Block: Stop writing.  Don’t write when you have it or it gets messed up (personal part 13 experience).  That’s that.

Sequel:

It’s called Blinding Love.  It’s about Adam and what happened to him.  There's two separate first point of views (one being Adam and the other being the interesting neighbor, Adrian).  Adam was in a terrible accident where he hurts his eyes and now, poor Adam is completely and utterly blind.  Adrian for the other side sees only beauty in Adam, despite that he hardly speaks and can’t see.  For Adrian is interested in changing his sexuality, and Adam, already heartbroken, can’t take it another time…