A/N: REWRITE

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To those who actually read this story or will read this story, I'm in the process of rewriting the entire beginning of this story

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To those who actually read this story or will read this story, I'm in the process of rewriting the entire beginning of this story. This may include all of the previous chapters (which I have recently taken down) and prologue (which is currently still available to read). However, the story line will remain as is in the description/summary I'm only changing how the story begins.

I know it was a long, and for me a painfully slow start of the book, so slow that I have put myself into writers block so I'm scrapping the beginning and writing a new one that will hopefully grab more reader's attention and get rid of a lot of the unnecessary boring bits and characters that are not crucial to the story in anyway; but I will throw the important scenes back in but in a different way. I'm keeping necessary Mel and GB interactions with Joanna in, preferably my favorite parts, but as I said rewritten.

I know where I'm going with the story, from start to finish, but like some writers I have a problem with how to get there

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I know where I'm going with the story, from start to finish, but like some writers I have a problem with how to get there. I believe now I have worked out a lot of kinks in the beginning so I don't get stuck in writers block (at least for a while). So all the boring and uninteresting parts that are not really dubbed as character development like how Joanna boringly got on and off a plane and hugged her old grandmother then met another old person who wasn't going to hire a 17 year old to intern in a mental institution and a day later unrealistically decided it was ok blah blah blah...

Yeah all that's gonna go totally unnecessary, unimportant and unrealistic to what's going to go down with Mel and River Oaks

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Yeah all that's gonna go totally unnecessary, unimportant and unrealistic to what's going to go down with Mel and River Oaks. Even though this is nonfiction in most sense I do still want to obtain the idea that this is a reality, but not the kind where a group of teen girls undergo a series of almost being killed by some unknown character that has a grudge against them(PLL)... So I'm changing Joanna's age to 22 or something and skip the part of how she got the job and start somewhere like 3 months into the beginning of her working in River Oaks as an adult as well as GB being a little older than her and changing the institution to being for juveniles and adults but wards are separate.

P.S.
Nothing against PLL I love the show and books but I have to admit it lacks realism so I consider it my guilty pleasure ;)...

Also, River Oaks is a Real Hospital in New Orleans so I kind of based my story off of the idea of it and stories I've heard from a therapist who worked there, but every thing, except for the name of River Oaks, is fictional and changed to fit my story.

And I will give a shout out to anyone who would want to make and send me a cover for this book (I make my own but their kind of lame :P)

And I will give a shout out to anyone who would want to make and send me a cover for this book (I make my own but their kind of lame :P)

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⏰ Last updated: May 30, 2016 ⏰

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