"Have I told you, how beautiful you are, baby, he said".
First, what's, up, with, all, the, commas everywhere, like are you an English wizard or something? Let me give you a hint hun, STOP. Thank you and don't go quoting what your dad tells you every night before he puts you in bed to make you shut the hell up and go to sleep "have I told you how beautiful you are baby? Now shut up and go to sleep" yeah we all know your secret you 3 year old kid. Now why all the spaces between words? If you don't know how to spell, then here is a simple request! DON'T MAKE STORIES okay thanks bye ;* ~A~
(This is a special type of edit, I'm starting to think I should be the "story criticizer" you don't like that? Good for you. )
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Dumb Fanfiction Moments
Fanfictionintroducing dumb fanfiction moments, where i tell you all the moments in fanfics that are just .. dumb. // made in 2013 so if there's any spelling mistakes DONT point them out \\
