So hey! I have returned to give you another insight! Today, we'll be "reviewing" @Skyler_Black45's "The Maze Runner" fan fiction which is literally titled "The Maze Runner."
- The title killed me. Isn't that technically copyright if you use the title of someone else's book as your own?
- EH. IT'S WAY TOO A SHORT AH.
- Um... There isn't much description whatsoever. What does the Box look like? How does the main character feel? We might as well be reading about a wall.
- Don't you think there'd be more opinions, like, I don't think the only thing that was on their minds, was that some random chick popped up in a (the) Box. They're probably wondering uh, I dunno, WHY SHE CAME UP AFTER SO LONG THEY'VE BEEN GETTING BOYS? WHO DA SHUCK SHE IS?! AND WHY IS MAMA NEWT BEING SO FRIENDLY?
~ He wasn't this friendly when Teresa showed her face (#MamaNoot)
- I like what you did with the ending. Did you steal it from Disney?
Because the first chapter was so short... There really isn't much to write besides that. Here's your review @Skyler_Black45!
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