Love at first sight

31 3 7
                                    

Comment who wants to be who's girlfriend I will show you who they are in the comments

There is

Louis: taken ( maddie )

Harry: ???? Comment if you want to be with Harry

Niall: taken ( Tina ) but not for long can you comment in the comments if you want to be nialls girlfriend

Zayn:???? Comment of you want to be with zayn

Liam:????? Comment if you want to be with Liam

_________________

Maddies pov

I walked over to Louis and Harry in my light blue dress and said in a shy voice

"Thank you"

He said back

"Hi and what why did you say that"

"You guys are my heroes"

"What us no no what did we do"

"You saved my life I went through depression.... (A/N you have heard her story so I'm not going to say it again )

"Wow that's so so"

"Weird"

"No touching I was was wondering if you want to come to nandos with us" Louis said looking in to my eyes in a soft voice

I looked in to his and said

"Yeah that would be great thanks"

He held my Hand and I touched his chest

"So do you want to come in to my house for a little bit" Louis said still looking into my eyes

"Yeah that would be nice"

We went inside and sat on the couch and just talked for a while

When Niall comes in with Tina they were holding hands

"Hey Louis hey Harry hey um who are you" Niall said to me

"I'm maddie

"What's your last name" Niall and Harry said

"Dawn I'm maddie dawn"

"That's a pretty name" Louis said to me

"Thanks"

"So niall are we going to nandos" Tina said

"Yes we are so let's go now the Boys are waitin for us"

"Ok let's go" Harry said

Louis took me in his car and Harry took Niall and Tina in his,

On the way there I told Louis something about Tina

"Louis I need to tell you something about Tina I used to go to high school with her"

"Why didn't you say hi to her then"

"Louis because she used to be my best friend"

"What happened"

"You know how I got depression well she is the reason she was the girl well my best friend that my boyfriend broke up with me for my boyfriend cheated on me with her and she cheated on her boyfriend with my old boyfriend she is not good for Niall she will hurt him and at such a young age we can't let her do that"

"I see well what are we going to do"

"I really don't know but we have to tell him soon and we have to split them up now"

"Ok but before we do that maddie dawn I liked you ever since you said hi to me on the street will you will you be my girlfriend"

"Yes Louis yes now let's go to nandos and save niall"

_______________

Hope you liked it will Tina be a CHΣΔTΣR or will niall be fine who knows

Please

Follow

Comment

Share

And vote❤❤❤

And one little thing if you put me in our status or your about me an say you are reading my book you will get a thanks in my book for the next chapter or two thanks keep reading.

Carrot diariesWhere stories live. Discover now