Sorry! This is not an One Direction Update. Its just I wrote this poem and wanted to ask you guys how is it?
If you like it then pls tell meh!I'll post some more love related stuff written by me. :)
I am in a big mess
Loving you wasn't a success.
You don't get how I feel
You stay as if its no big deal.
I don't care what people think
My love for you can never shrink.
Loads of times I have been betrayed,
But now all those memories have to fade.
When we are together,
All the problems seem to be gone forever.
Sorry, This is taking to long but,
I've been writing my heart all along.
I just want you with me
Forever And ever till it can be...
This is short but this is my second poem and its better one. So pls comment and tell me how is it.
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As everyone liked this. I've started a new Book " Love! The most painful emotion." Pls check it out.
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