Hi,this is my first story so I would appreciate your guys comments.Please dont be scared to give criticism. It's greatly accepted.I really hope you enjoy this story!!
I'm honestly scared. It's cold and dark. My legs are cramping from running. Why am I running? Oh yeah, I'm being chased by someone intent on harming me.I lose my footing and slip sideways but carry on running.As my pursuer closes the gap between us I see that the ground drops into open air for about a few metres.I jump without hesitating and fall...
