Origin- Mark 2

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Hello readers! =)

I've been writing Origin for quite a while now, but wasn't really happy with it. So I rewrote some of it in a different style and just wanted to see how it would be recieved amongst you guys. 

I sent the first draft of Origin Mark 2 to my friend, Cailohippie, who told me the main character was unlikable. So, I'd just like to tell her that I think I've fixed it now =).

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