Eternally Royal (needs help)

Someone Help With My Story!

    Rose was born when her father finds out her mother is pregnant at 5 months. her father never wanted a baby so instead of keeping her he cut her mother open with a kitchen knife and stabbed the baby in the back. rose goes through years of abuse and neglect, but sees a light in the dark when her sister is born. rose is only 12 at the time, but she is very mature. she found out about her powers at the age of 3 when her father tried to kill her a second time. she then uses her powers to save herself and her sister fleeing into the woods away from the wretched prison once called home.

    Rose is on the run with her 4 year old sister, and she gets caught using her powers which include shifting into any type of cat, master of all tongues spoken to man Beast or animal, ability to master any weapon put in her hands, physically visible emotions, super speed (faster that the speed of light), ability to regenerate no matter how extensive the injury is, ability to read the minds of a person with heightened emotions, and the ability to concentrate emotions to create force fields. She is taken by an inter dimensional monarch country, whose reputation is built upon cruelty and torture. she and her sister or taken prisoner, and her sister is used as leverage over her of a sort. she is told that if she does not do exactly as they say then her sister will be killed. she goes on many missions and finally at the age of 14 she comes back from her last mission. she is taken to a room and showing a video, that was taken the day that she and her sister were captured. the video shows her sister being publicly executed. She goes on a rampage and lets her carnivorous I'd take over for she is part cat. she eats anything that moves. Soon there is nothing left the terrible country but ruins of a castle.

    Once she snaps out of her terrible Rampage she comes across the doorway of Darkness seemingly leading to nowhere. Since she has nowhere else to go she decides to take the chance and jump through Landing herself and a new dimension and another strange world. She is created by hundreds upon thousands of hungry poor and homeless citizens. they speak many different languages yet she can understand every single one. they claim that she is the chosen one, their rightful Queen, ruler of Tiāntáng, which translates to Paradise. she is put through many trials and rids the country of all evil and poverty after her coronation. she create a reputation for herself, for being just and kind.

    she soon turns her Palace into a school for Girls and trains them in math, science, battle, and the arts. The school is a huge success and she restores the country to its former glory, but a new threat arises. A normally peaceful country was raided and Tiāntáng was framed for the crime. The country is attacked during the night and she gives herself up to save her people. She is taken and told that she can return home after her country pays for their losses. Her head maid esperanza pays the demand after 2 days, but she is held for 5 months and is tortured continuously. She goes the first 3 months without access to food or water, and soon begins to feel her carnivorous side take over. Every day she is moved from torture device to torture device and begins to crave raw meat. the guards have never smelled so appealing, but before she eats them she instills fear upon them and reads their minds. She gives them a trial and decides whether or not they are despicable enough to deserve execution.