Please Calm Down my dearest Miranda. Just you guys know you should read her story called " Stealing Her Innocence" Its honestly very great! Also please i really need feedback so I can know if i should keep updating or not because if i don't get that many reads,votes,comments, then I'll most likely take it as you wonderful people of Wattpad not liking my story. So please! I really need the feedback!
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*Louis' POV*
My heart was beating out of my chest. Even though I'm the one who made the move. I thought she would've stopped me by now. Since she hasn't, I should go all the way with her. I take the hem of her shirt and pull it off of her disconnecting our lips for the slightest moment to only return back to her soft lips waiting to be attacked. I swipe my tongue back over her bottom lip hoping she will let my tongue back in. She resisted for a couple of seconds before allowing my tongue to discover her mouth again. God, she is so fucking beautiful. Her curves are breathtaking. I move my hands towards her sweatpants and try to pull it down. Once I get it off, I take a look at her. How can someone control themselves while staring at a goddess? I know i cant, its obvious by my actions right now. She starts shifting under me and tries to get on top. Oh God, I feel like I'm dreaming. She leans down and reconnects our lips.
Her hands slide down to the hem of my shirt and tries to remove me of my top. I help her and she starts rubbing her hands up and down my chest making me harder then i already am, how is that even fucking possible. I make eye contact with her while she looks up from trying to unbutton my jeans. She fiddles with the button and belt a little more before she rids me of my pants too leaving me in my boxers. If we don't start soon, I might release right in my boxers. I pull her back down to have some type of contact with her lips, she decides to move and start kissing my neck, exploring trying to find my sweet spot. After kissing and sucking around some skin, she reaches it, right under my ear. She notices it when i let out a throaty groan, she smirks against my skin sucking on it more. That little evil angel, if that even makes sense.
She starts palming me from my boxers earning another groan from me.
"Please stop teasing me Lola, please? I have waited too long." I tell her desperately needing her. She nods her head and decides to get up. What is happening? I hope she didn't realize that this might be the wrong thing to do. Even though it feels so right.
"I don't know, Louis, this is so weird. I mean I got caught up in the moment but, but, I don't know" She says, looking down at the hardwood floor. Not now, we were about to have the time of our lives, and this happens. Oh, this sounds even worse, I sound so fucking selfish.
"But, thought we were going somewhere with this?"
"Yeah so did I, but it just didn't feel right. You're my best friend and doing this with you is just so-"
"Wrong?" I cut her off sounding a little annoyed. She does have a point though, she is my best friend also and she just made it obvious that she doesn't feel the same way about me.
"Yeah, I'm sorry i even led you on this far, I just had no idea what i should've done." She says truthfully. "I'm really sorry" She looks back down at the hardwood.
"Its fine, its my fault. I shouldn't have just kissed you like that, without warning. I should just leave."
"Okay, but, can we put this behind us?" She looks back up making eye contact with me.
"Yes, we can. I'll call you tomorrow."
"Promise"
"Promise" I tell her and give her a hug before collecting my clothes. I slide them on and wave at her while walking out the door.
I wish she would have given me a chance, I could've show her how i would treat her right. Then, when i think about it, i shouldn't have made a move that fast. I should have asked her out on a proper date.
"Shit!" I yell in my car hitting the steering wheel. I'm such an idiot, literally the worlds biggest idiot. I turn on the radio hoping to get my mind off of Lola for now and pull out of her driveway.
*Lola's POV*
Did he really try that on me? I guess it was partially my fault for leading him on for that long, if i hadn't snapped back into reality, seeing what i actually was about to do, I would have probably lost my innocence, and I do not want to lose it to someone I do not love. I mean yeah, I do love Louis, but only as a best friend, or a brother figure. Guilt starts to wash over me and I decide to just get ready for bed.
My sweatpants and top are on the floor when i start to look for them. I pick them up and fold them, putting them back in my drawer and grab my pj's. I slip them on and walk towards my bathroom to wash up. What a crazy night, never thought i would have almost got there with Louis, I think while brushing my teeth. I walk back to my bed and get into my warm covers, turning to my bedside lamp and turning it off. Soon, i let the darkness of sleep take me to a better place. Or so i thought.
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FanficLola was a very shy, kept to herself type of girl. She had many friends also. She met Zayn when she was very young, and only to meet him again so many years later. Will they be together? Will it be fate? Or will it be destiny ?
