Testing Out My Writing And Trying Some Challenges

The Wrong, Never, Short Love

First challenge. Comment on how I did.
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Never have I thought, never had I assume that I would meet her at such a sorrow time. If I believe in fate, than this was a sick joke it put on. From the moment my sight caught hers I knew... I knew that it was love at first sight, if only it wasn't at such bad timing. Because not only did I fall in love with her, I already figure out by her sitting by herself on that brown, squeaky chair on the dull green grass. That she was now the widow of an old friend that I have not seen since my college days at Yale.
Such cruel is fate to make my heart beat, to make me fall in love for my old friend's now widow wife. Especially at his funeral on what is a lovely sunny-cloudy day to many that aren't here at this place where the dead rest. And by the look on her lovely, yet emotional, face, I can already know that she was thinking along those same lines.
About how cruel fate is, to not only make her husband-less and being at a funeral with people she never seen in her whole life. But to, only mere seconds after pouring her handful of sand on his forever closed coffin, make her quickly fall in love with a stranger that in a past life knew her lover.
That will be our first, but last time we will ever meet, since she is going back to their house to try and accept the new changes for her life. As for me I am going to the airport after the funeral and go to the country of Japan where my new job is at. How short and wrong our love story is with no words, along with only a couple of hours. Such cruel is fate indeed.
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I did a rough draft of this and tried it on Pinterest, but I like how I added more details in it, made it more emotional. Until next time.