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Carmin
"... and one and two, three and four..." the instructor, Leo, repeats for the eight billionth time. In case you don't know I'm currently stuck in a dance class, for what dance, I have zero idea. "Carmin will you please come here" Leo states demandingly, I just roll my eyes before filling the space beside him. Oh how I already hate this guy, first he forces me to dance with a perverted old man, now he is demanding me to stand beside him. Next disrespectful act he performs towards me I will personally deal to him myself. After a long minute of all eyes on me, including the old creepers I start to feel a little pissed. I absolutely hate attention, especially this type, by the glint of mesmerization each person holds in their eyes I know that it's all in admiration to the creature that is me. Carmin Elise Draymond.
According to all who know me, I'm a goddess of another world with my slim, curvy figure, perfect, naturally curled, soft, brown verging black hair. Light hazel eyes, made up mostly of an emerald green, that are said to penetrate ones soul, my lips, a rose pink matching the natural blush of my cheeks. A butt rounded perfectly, firm to the touch just adds to the illusion of perfection many see. Standing at a small 5'2 nearing 6'0- jk. It's all just wishful thinking- I still can't seem to look at things from their perspective, all I see is a normal seventeen year old girl on the small side of everything (besides boobs, butt, ego, and whole lot of sass). Feeling frustrated by the gawking dancers I decide to head home and help my mummy with dinner since I'm hungry. Yes yes I'm seventeen and still call my mum mummy, I'm a big kid now so deal with it 😂
I begin putting all my things together when I receive a text message from my mum.
Mama Venice
Don't you dare leave or their will be no dessert.I sigh at the text then turn my attention to a smirking Leo. So that's the game he wants to play huh. I send him a smirk of my own, looks like payback is going be a pain for him, before setting my things back down, returning to the empty space beside the dance instructor. "So what do you need me for Lionell?" I question innocently, remembering the first class I attended three weeks ago. He absolutely hates being called Lionell so I keep the insult in my back pocket waiting for it to fall into my hand in this worldwide game of poker. Lionell shoots me a glare as hard as stone which has me in fits of laughter, he shouldn't have messed with me and my food.
I continue with my laughter when I hear Leo speak loudly to the old crowd of amateur dancers. "That was a great session. See you all same time next week" he finishes with a bright smile towards the older group. Yasss, I'm out. Standing up again after crouching to collect my gym bag and water bottle I hit the great wall of China but feel it stabilising me around the waist then standing me up right again. "Carmin I'm going to have to ask you to stay behind" spoke the great wall. I groan at those words causing the wall or Leo to chuckle at my childish behaviour. Disappointment fills my being since once again I'm blocked from escape. "Okay Leo. What do you want?"...
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