The wolf and the vampire

Chloes story part 1

"I'm Chloe I'm 14 I get bullied at school and what I've never told anyone is I'm a vampire and I'm a foster kid" *she writes in her journal*
Headmaster Danielle: Chloe are you ready for school
Chloe: yes ma'am
Hm Danielle: cmon then
*I run down down stairs and trip and other girls laugh*
Natalie: haha clutz
Hm Danielle: all right enough and Chloe please be more careful
Chloe: Sorry miss
-we all walk to the school-
*When we get there Natalie holds the door and waits for me and trips me then pushes me out and the door locks*
Natalie: haha clutzy no one is gonna care enough to safe you from anyone now *she walks away*
*I get small and hide myself* help someone I'm scared *I wisper but it's very quiet*
*This boy walking by sees me and walks towards me*
Oh no *i wisper* d-don't hurt me
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