This chapter is pretty much all Error's pov btw
Flash back
Error pov
"So who's soul do I have to take?" I ask. "A HuMaN's NaMeD y/N" Gaster replies glitchingly (If that is a word) Gaster disappears as I begin my search. Y/n M/n (If you have one) L/n, Orphan, Goes to y/s (Y/s = your school), is ?? years old (You guys can decide the age to lazy to debate it right now :P) This is going to be easy.
Time skip to finding her
I see her with some of her friends carrying some back packs. Camping trip? this is too easy... I look at her until she looks at me. Shoot! (No swear words naughty readers ;) ) I think she saw me! Good job Error!.... She shrugs it off and continues climbing the mountain. I follow her until they all fall asleep. She might of sensed my presence... She wakes up and looks around finding the hole. "Woah that goes really deep. I should tell my friends" she mumbles as she turns around only to see me. "Boo!" I say as I push her. She starts screaming.
How cute... I quickly catch her with my strings before she falls. I quickly teleport down. "W-Who are y-you?" y/n stutters. "I'm Error" I reply smirking at her stuttering. Aww she's scared... "Now let's go to my home" I say bored. "What makes you think I'm going with you!" she replies Feisty!.... "Well let's go over your choices, 1 you can come with me ,2 you can scream for your friends who won't hear you, 3 you can get knocked out by me if you refuse to come." I smile. She went with 2 and starts screaming for her friends. I smirk and knock her out and carry her.
Wow! she's lighter than I thought she would be... (Wait did Error just call y/n Fat?! I don't know, but if he did he going to have a bad time) I look at her face. She's very pretty really, Such a shame... I quickly open a portal to go to the anti-void. Once I get there I leave her to rest and go to an AU. "Howdy! I'm Flowey, Flowey the Flower! You are new to th- Wait who are you! What are you!" The flower asked.
"Oh I'm Error nice to meet you Flowey" I reply. Flower looks at me and tries to decide whether to trust me or not. I guess he decides to trust me because he doesn't look so tense. "Hey want to do something fun?" I ask. "Sure!" Flower replies. We went to bother Underfell Sans by stealing his stuff. "PAPYRUS! I am missing my left shoe, my bed, and worst of all my chocolate! Did you take them!" He yelled. Flower and I had a lot of fun annoying him. Maybe Flowey will become a good friend.
Time skip to when y/n wakes up
When I go back to the anti void I find y/n speaking with #11. "Yeah, but Error can be nice he is just a big butt sometimes" laughed #11 "You know it's not nice to talk about someone when they are not there" I say. #11 and y/n look startled as they heard me. I laugh. "Sorry Error didn't think you where here" y/n mumbles. "Don't worry about it and I see you have met #11" I say. This confuses her. "He calls me #11, but my real name is Sans" #11 whispers to y/n. "I'm going to call you Blueberry because you are wearing blue!" Y/n teases to #11. #11 seems fine with the nick name though.
Time skip (Sorry for the time skips)
Y/n and I have had a lot of adventures together and had gone to many AUs...I was falling in love with her. This time we were in UnderTale and Sans met y/n when she ran of exploring. "Who are you?" Sans asked me. I laugh and reply "I'm Error". He nods and puts y/n behind him. "Your the one messing with the timelines! You made that deal with Gaster! The deal where you- you are going to take y/n's soul!" he yells at me.My eyes fill with worry when y/n's face filled with shock. I teleport behind Sans and grab y/n and teleport to the anti void.
"Is it true!?" y/n yells at me. I don't respond. "So it is true then! That you are going to take my soul and give it to some one because you made a deal! That's why you kidnapped me!" Y/n continues to yell at me. She is crying. "I'm sorry! I didn't know I was going to-" I tell her. "You were going to what?" she asks me. "That I was going to fall in love with you!" I finish. "Neither did I" she said not yelling at me or with anger,but with honesty.
"I love you y/n! I always have! The day I met you I just-" I feel tears roll down my face. She hugs me. "I love you too Error" She says and she does the unthinkable.... she kisses me. I am shocked. I kiss her back and we pull away. "I love you too Error" she repeats more to herself than me. I open a portal to waterfall in an AU and ask her if I can have some time alone "Yeah I need some too" she says as she waves me goodbye. The deal I have to break it.
I open a portal and go to where Gaster is. "Gaster I've changed my mind I don't want to kill y/n!" I say. "ChAnGeD YoUr MiNd?" Gaster repeats. "oH ThAt iS a ShAmE ReAlLy AfTeR AlL LoOk" Gaster says as a video appears out of nowhere. It's y/n in waterfall and Flowey approaches her and says hello, but then he- he- he kills her. My heart breaks as I see the light leave her eyes.That traitorous flower. "oH WeLl GuEsS YoU WiLl HaVe tO DeAl WiTh gLiTiChEs FoReVeR, I MeAn UnLeSs YoU WaNt HeR DeAd WiThOuT PuRpOsE" Gaster says. "What do you mean?" I reply. (Stop I can see you writing your comments about the song already!) "AfTeR ThE WoRlD ReSeTs I WiLl AlWaYs KiLl HeR UnLeSs YoU BrInG HeR tO mE tHeN ShE CaN DiE WiTh a PuRpOsE" Gaster proposes. "Okay" is all I manage to say.
And that is how the story began
1071 words! So long! This has been the longest chapter! But you guys deserve it! Thanks so much for 4k views (or reads)!!!!! You guys are awesome! Hope you guys enjoyed that little flashback! (Btw this is the real beginning of the story! Chapter 1 I doesn't happen until many, many, MANY timelines after this) This was to explain Gaster's and Flowey's relationship with Error and the FIRST timeline or the first time Error meets y/n and makes the deal. Welp! Until the next chapter my Skelly-Friends!
