As I mentioned several weeks ago, I had begun editing The Spare.
Not much has changed - mostly the correction of typos, rearranging of sentences, etc.
I added some photos - some of them of people I thought fit how I saw the characters in my head - so feel free to check those out and let me know what you think. :)
I also got sooo tired of the 'pm for link of the first chapter' set up, I censored Chapter One and published it again. Once again - not much changes in that either. (The first version that was made private is still up, however.)
And that's basically it.
Did I miss anything? If I did, do me a solid and let me know, yes?
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The Spare (18+ Only) - Noblesse Oblige #1
عاطفيةIsis Kalenius isn't the nicest person in the world, but her sister, Phoenix, is much worse. When her sister's fiance, Leo DeRozan, calls her over into the VIP section with only one thing in mind, she sees an opportunity to get back at Phoenix and t...
