The Wrong Murder

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Perhaps you will be reading the description and thinking the following at the same time:

This story is totally nuts!

Well... actually the description is cut out and is a small(tiny) part of the story, so I believe that it doesn't really tell you the plot.

Moreover, the plot itself is pretty misty and hard to understand. So I decided to make all of this clear before the whole story starts to let all readers acknowledge it better in the future.

So, um... if you don't think it is necessary or you want to keep the plot difficult to understand, you may just as well skip this chapter and proceed to the prologue.

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Ivy Camella Halim, known as Cam to her best friend Anthony, is a girl born in a one-parent family. Ivy and her father lived in a sort-of apartment, where it is cramped with four grey wall and a small window on the side. You see, they were not that rich. In fact, war made them an even lower status in the society.

Lucas Arthur Halim, her father, loved his wife, her mother, Camella. Ivy has her shadow, has her scent, has the twinkle in the eye that Camella used to have. Ivy made him think of his soulmate. He raised her since she is the only thing the couple had left. He is against war. While the government has lost, he stood up to defend their home.

Anthony William Raah, is Ivy's best friend, goes by 'Will' Playful, cheerful, but also reliable under certain circumstances. He is the Halims' closest neighbor, and lived with his grandmother, who died a few days before Anthony's 8th birthday. He is born on 22nd Jan.

Jeremy Ford, is also known as General Ford who conducts the army for a living. He hates traitors, and will do anything to succeed. A nasty person who looks down on children. He is Ivy's enemy.

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The people above are the 'V.I.Ps' in the whole plot. It's not that I wish to make this story too serious or tense,

It's just that I HAVE to.

Dear readers, have you ever seen a story full of revenge and hatred have the word "comedy" in the vocabulary base? Well if you do you might as well tell me about it cause I just HAVE TO read it!

However, this doesn't mean that I would not try to add some 'laughter elements' (as I call it) into the story, but results in different occasions like experiments, joke talks, DNA tests (not true) BLAH BLAH etc. all points to a big, fat fact.

I AM NOT A COMEDIC PERSON.

So just drop the comedic story and let it run along...
I apologize, dear readers.

This is in fact my first story in Wattpad, or should I call it, my first VERY LONG story in life. I do hope you will all forgive me for my grammer mistakes, tenses mistakes, plot holes etc., I am a beginner writer after all.

After a long, useless prep. talk, it is about time to start this story. Do please enjoy.
(P. S. That's lame)

Tigerox129

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