Vampire (Naruto fanfiction) by neichopu

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You'll see why I put that picture up there. The Sue's author took our review a little too hard. 

Anyways, what's up guys? How's life? Milo and I've been working our asses off trying to get our pictures done. Mainly Milo though. Milo's the drawer of this duo. That'll hopefully be up soon in another book. 

Just wait till we start animating them.

Let's get to the topic at hand. So far this is the last interaction we've had with an author. It wasn't a bad discussion per say, it's just that the author took away a negative outlook on themselves after it which is definitely not what we want. 

neichopu, you better read this. This is for you. I want you to listen to Don't Stop Believing as background music. You know what, 

Artist: Journey (journeyVEVO) *Disclaimer* I do not own this song please do not sue me. 

THERE IT IS. YOU LISTEN TO THAT AND GET INSPIRED. 

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Children. You know Milo and I don't think you're terrible authors. I sound like a broken record, but we have to stress that. It's the most important take away from our reviews. Terrible authors are people that condone racism, rape, etc. in their stories. Pretty sure none of you are like that. 

Anyways, Milo and I both reviewed the story Vampire by neichopu. As previously mentioned, Milo is pretty busy drawing. It'll be mainly me replying to this author's comments. Yep, you're stuck with Kane again guys. Milo's playing hard to get. Alright, let's get into this.

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I can't even remember what I was doing when I first read the author's comment. A lot has been going on with college and whatnot, but I do recall feeling pretty guilty. That's never a good sign. 

I wrote this book back when I was around twelve, or thirteen. I wrote this for fun, then and I didn't expect the book to 'blow up' after I posted a few chapters. English is indeed, my first language. But you couldn't expect a person in sixth or seventh grade to write a flawless book now, can't you?

 But you couldn't expect a person in sixth or seventh grade to write a flawless book now, can't you?

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Especially when she first wrote it for fun out of randomness.

It was a pretty short response, but she made her point. We definitely don't expect anyone's book to be flawless. Everyone, including us, has room to improve. I replied a few minutes after.

Nope. The fact that you were so young explains why it wasn't high caliber. If your story isn't meant to be taken seriously then I would write that in the description. Milo and I go in thinking that the author wants to make this a professional grade story. We would have avoided reviewing it if you didn't mean for it to be a serious piece.

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