Once Upon A Time...

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Review by Heer275

Book- Once Upon A Time...

Author- SamairaP

The story has been completed. It has many grammatical mistakes which seriously need to be edited.

The fact that the writer tried to write something which was a combination of two genres - supernatural and romance - is to be appreciated. But even that turns dull because of the wrong grammar. Piya being a typical workaholic seems a bit too cliché. Rahul Mehra is unbearable at first, but then he becomes bearable for a few chapters.

The quotation in the picture which has been added in the epilogue and the introduction - "Once upon a time, I became yours and you became mine. And we'll stay together through both the tears and the laughter. Because that's what they call happily ever after." - is very, very beautiful.

The book can be read once.

Then, the problem that I found with the end. It's just shown that Piya was found dead in her apartment. I think that the author should've shown somewhat of an aftermath. The end is startling, yet boring.

The cover is nice, too.

All in all, the story deserves a 2.5/5.

The author may disagree, but that's what I thought about the book.



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