So I read this story and I was really impressed with it although it has a little tweaking to be done with it but it's not extreme.
Anyway, it's about a girl named Jess who in the first chapter is with her friends; gossiping like teenage girls do. She leaves her friends house and then hARRY JUST COMES OUT OF THE BLUE AND GRABS HER THEN NIALL COMES AND SAVES HER LIKE YOU GO DUDE. GOOD FOR YOU.
But anyway, good story line, you just need to improve on your spelling.
Rate
7/10.
