There was only the prologue, and this is only the beginning of the story. There are people out there who happen to abuse prologues with stuff that you really don't need. I'm guilty of such as well, but not at all times. So, for now, I will be critiquing the prologue.
Firstly: How does the language fit?
The language used in this work is very personal. There are references to the reader and the possible experiences they may have had prior to reading, or maybe even while reading. It asks a lot of questions, questions the reader may have been asking themselves.
Either way, it's very relate-able. It's got the sort of feel to it that you can tell this will be a thought invoking novel to read. Seeing as it was the product of a wandering mind in the middle of an essay, that could very well be a hint to it.
Secondly: Does it seem like it'll be a good romance?
I can honestly say that I can't judge romances very well, besides how realistic they appear. This being said, this seems like it will be relative realistic, or very realistic. This would mean that the chapters play out the relationship step by step, and I have a feeling it'll be cute.
I also have a feeling I would be destroyed by feels.
Lastly: Does this leave an impression?
Are you kidding me? It most definitely does, with the serious questions that are posed in the prologue alone, you know there's going to be something coming back to you. I'm not saying this to be nice, but I'd honestly check it out.
If you know me, I'm not one for the light romances either, so it must be a heavy, serious one coming our way as the perfect storm of feels.
