a/n about the last chapter

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hello readers :), lei here ! i just wanted to explain that with the last chapter, that is not what i intially wanted to put.

most of the parts in the last chapter were changed. that's because i kept debating which would sound good with each character and their hormones towards jungkook.

here i'll tell you what i was supposed to put and what i put instead...

bold is what i intended to put, italics is the explanation of that scene and not bold is whats on the last chapter.

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scene pick #1: intro
in the first scene where taehyung and jungkook were walking, and jungkook tells taehyung that he had to meet jaebum at the library.

what's in the chapter:
as jungkook walks to the library to meet jaebum, taehyung comes out of no where and follows jungkook. he asks why jungkook was going, and all jungkook says is that he's going to meet jaebum, and making taehyung a little jealous. but once jungkook sees that he tells him that they are just cousins causing taehyung to plead to jungkook to reschedule their meeting. when jungkook asks "why?" taehyung says that he wanted to spend more time with his kookie.

what i intended:
when taehyung gets jealous, his jealousy hormones kick in and because of that he pulls jungkook into a classroom, and shoves him against the wall. before jungkook could say anything taehyung leans down and whispers in jungkook's ear, "you're all mine" in a husky voice causing jungkook to feel as if he wanted something, but as he pushes those thoughts away he just smirks before walking away from taehyung, and bumping into yoongi.

scene pick #2: jaebum
in that scene, jaebum told jungkook that he couldn't make it to the library, but he will meet him later.

what's in the chapter
when jungkook finally gives in to taehyung's plead, he gets a text from jaebum saying that he couldn't make it because he had to "do something" with a "friend"

what I intended
jungkook ends up bringing taehyung along, jaebum agrees and tells jungkook that he will meet him at the library.

I was gonna put that in, but then i thought... nah, not yet.

scene pick #3: the tree scene

as yoongi runs away from taehyung, dragging jungkook behind him he makes jungkook climb up the tree and they hide there until taehyung is gone. once he is gone jungkook decides to ask him some questions about the group. but as he starts asking, he starts wondering why yoongi hasn't shown any hormonal feeling towards him yet.

what's in the chapter
jungkook asks about how much their hormones, and how they acted towards him, but decides to pop up the questions to yoongi saying, "am i pretty?" and starts testing him to see if his hyung could be turned on the same way as the others. when his idea surprisingly turns out to be correct, jungkook feels like he should regret it yet something inside him doesn't.

yoongi's hormones turn on and he wants jungkook to be punished for doing that. but as he looks at jungkook and sees that his eyes are filled with regret, yoongi tries to snap out of it and tries to go back to normal, not wanting to take advantage of the boy.

what I intended: kiss interupted by pabo
when yoongi brings jungkook to the classroom, he immediately pushes jungkook to the wall and just starts attacking his neck with kisses while saying, "how dare you test me... you're gonna get it" but as he was about to kiss jungkook's full lips, jimin enters the room, claiming that he forgot his bag but at the same time motioning to seokjin that they were in there doing 'something.'

scene pick #4: seokjin

when yoongi was about to do something to jungkook, seokjin interupts them, surprising them and tells them that free period is over.

in the chapter:
seokjin is the one who interrupts them before anything else happens

what was intended:
i was actually gonna put hoseok instead, but then i realized that seokjin barely had moments with jungkook

scene pick #5: lies

seokjin tells jungkook that he'll take him along, and he accepts. seokjin then turns the opposite direction, and pulls jungkook into the supply closet and tells him that he lied about being late to the next class.

what's in the chapter
seokjin basically grabbed jungkook and led him to the supply closet by tricking him, telling him that he'd be late for his next period. but really, school ended early. as jungkook looks into seokjin's eyes, he sees that his hormones had turned on, and says that kookie needed a lesson for being a "naughty kookie" and starts kissing his neck first

what i intended
don't ask but, when i first started liking bts I don't know why but initially my first ship was jinkook, but then it changed after to vkook and then etc. so what I intended was that jin would be jungkook's first kiss.

if you remember from a chapter ago, or two jungkook said that he has never kissed anyone before... and well yeah, i was gonna put that seokjin kisses jungkook.

final scene pick #6: interruption

before seokjin could attach his lips to jungkook's full lips, someone opens the door, pulls jungkook away and runs

what's in the chapter :
basically what i just said^ and no one knows who by ^-^

what I intended: taehyung or namjoon
i thought of the taehyung or namjoon to be the one who interrupts them tbh.

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oKAY! that's all that i could think of
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tell me how would you feel if i added those instead

or

if i made the right choice and that the last chapter was okay ^-^

thanks for reading this note^-^
-Lei 💓

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