January 1st 2015
“Come on Ray! It’ll be fun!” Jax said as he got in the car. “What about When? Should I wake him up?” Ray stated standing at the door way. Jax shook his head no. “He’ll tell mom and dad.” Ray glared at her brother, “I guess your’re right.”she finally said with a big sigh as she got in the car and it started to move. In the small town of Evergrow, one thing was very famous to all the teens in this town...racing. Not just any kind of racing, but one where they drive a motorcycle up the old train tracks. Every Wednesday teens would gather in the dead of night deep in the woods without there parents knowing, have a big party and race! It was extremely exciting and, of course dangerous. Ray always wanted to race with her brother. But you had to be 18. “Your 16, two years younger then me, you'll get to race soon.” Jax said softly as he glanced at his little sister. “I know, and I'm gonna kick your butt!” Ray shouted in a playful voice.
“Okay let me get this straight, a blonde, perky, happy, bright blue mini skirt girl is gonna kick my butt?” he said giggling.
Jax and Ray couldn't be any different, Jax had a mean attitude and was always calm, leather jacket, black hair kind of guy...Ray was anything but! Ray started to laugh for no reason. “Whats wrong with you?” Jax asked while laughing. “I was just thinking something When sai----” In the middle of her story Jax’s side of the car gets hit. As the car skids sideways accross the road Ray’s head wiplashes towards the window and brakes it. All she feels is a huge incline to close her eyes, and she does.
Ray finally comes to, and blinks hard to make her vision acute again.“Ugh! HELP! SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP!” Ray yelled in bloody murder. Ray starts to wipe her forhead ferociously, that way blood doesn't get in her eyes. She looks at Jax, useing her other arm to shakes him…”Jax?” ---silence”JAX!”---not a word. She started to cry as she looked at his head and saw a huge gash across his face. “ANYONE?? PLEASE!!” she screams. Ray looks back at Jax, remembering his sweet smile and wonderful attitude he used towards Ray and When. Then she remebers herself asking if When would have wanted to come, she starts to cry harder. He saved When!
Ray wiped the blood from her head away from her eyes again . She sees another car full of other people crying and screaming. One of them gets out of the driver side of the car. “Holy crap!” a boy says as he helps others out the car. In a weak, sad voice Ray says “help us?” As the boy comes over towards her she says, “No, not me,” slowly lifts her arm and points, “Him, save him first.”
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Red Dot
Narrativa generaleRay is a 17 year girl, she is extremely quite, sarcastic, mean, a showoff, and a bit of a criminal...All because of a tragic episode in her life. People aren't always as fine as they seem, now are they?
