VividDreamMlp's oc VividDream (jeez everyone puts their OCS name into there's x3)
Any who
Name- VividDream
Age- 14
Looks: Lavender with a dark purple mane and earrings
Occupation- Luna's student
Species- Alicorn
OK...I know what your thinking. "Oh this oc is a Mary Sue because its an alicorn and bc oskcmdkekvmfkxkck"
Well....no....actually alicorns CAN make really good OCS. At least she has a name ^∆^
What I would change: I would add more to her character. Like maybe she isn't an alicorn, but is still Luna's student. I'd love to see a Pegasus as a princess student!
Hope you like this VividDreamMlp
(UPDATED SELF - WHEN I REREAD THIS I REALIZED I NEVER ASK THE OCS PERSONALITY. PLEASE ADD THAT IN YOUR COMMEMTS!)
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