ElectroMiku's oc Aquila
Name: Aquila
Age:
Looks: Dark gray coat, deep blue mane and tail
Cm: Megaphone with sword across it
Occupation: Luna army general
Personality: Wants to be an alicorn. Is jealous of Twilight since she is one.
Species: Bat pony
Is it a Mary sue? - nah..its a cool oc! I like her flaws in jealousy and flaws never make a Mary sue.
What would I change?- hmmmm this is tricky. Its really original I like your oc a lot! So...I wouldn't change anything actually!
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