Today I'm gonna be reviewing Healing by WarriorofFire2of3
This is a WOF AT(Alternate Timeline) Fanfiction.
It has a new prophecy and things are different now again. Remember there are spoilers so please, if you haven't. Read it.
It starts some where during Moon Rising, after they gang knows about Moon's powers. So, it starts off a prologue in Peril's perspective. Already we can see differences. Scarlet somehow, get's past everything and get's to Peril, kidnapping her.
Then we go back to other dragons. Moon and her friends are having a nice peaceful lunch. When a new prophecy comes, a different one then we know.
Then everything goes here and there, with everyone trying to help Moon.
Soon a dance get's announced. By Clay, how he got Tsunami to let him do it instead of her, we will never know.XD
So of course ya know, in between we have boring classes, boy drama, and more. (Sorry if I sound half hearted, when I read something that's only part way done I tend to forget things for some reason.)
It's a nice start. There is already a really goof story set up. The characters seem pretty true to the original material.
The only complaint is that there is a LOT of errors. Both in punctuation, and spelling. To the writer, I would highly suggest you put Healing threw lots of spell check editing. It will give the book more appeal the less errors there are. I hope you have taken no offense to this. The author, or anyone else. I'm simply being honest on what I think. But I also want to make sure no one gets hurt.
I hope you guys enjoyed this review!
-Starry
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