Hey guys!!! So I decided to put 'The Outcomes of Failure' on hold because I'm not feeling the story anymore. I don't know where I'm going with it and I don't have the inspiration to write it anymore. In the shower (yes kind of tmi and weird but meh?) I came up with the idea of a new story and I think I like it better so I'm writing a new one. Heres the description of my story.
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'I'm running. As fast as my legs can take me. They can't catch up to me. They just can't. I need to survive. For my mother, friends and everyone stuck in this perfect lie. I must escape.'
Set in the distant future, 16 year old Jaelynn Dombroski, has become a part of the resistance. Polishing and learning skills of combat and how to handle deadly weapons. What's her ultimate goal? To bring the Circle down by revealing the perfect lie.
At such a young age she has learned to not completely trust, to not be weak, to fight and to not love. Most importantly she must not share her secret If she breaks these rules she will die.
Will the sacrifices she's made and others have made be in vain? Or will she finally show the ugly truth of the perfect lie?
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Sooooooooo.... How was that?? Did you like that? Personally I like this story better and it's more planned out unlike TOOF (haha thats funny) . Anyway vote, comment, follow and all that jazz? Also please give me some constructive critizism pls!! And yeh also if you want pls make me a cover??? Thanks! The 1st chapter will be up shortly, probably today. :)
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The Perfect Lie
Teen Fiction'I'm running. As fast as my legs can take me. They can't catch up to me. They just can't. I need to survive. For my mother, friends and everyone stuck in this perfect lie. I must escape.' Set in the distant future, 16 year old Jaelynn Dombroski, has...
