My (not) So Amazing Drawings

Question

Hey guys! Ok so we all know that I have two books already that I update daily but I'm thinking of doing another book. My first book is about to end so to replace that book I'm going to post the first chapter of it and see if you guys like it. I'm planing on it being about a dancer. (Between you guys and me, I'm secretly a dancer. I'm a self taught kinda) I don't know if it should be a reader insert or I should make it a normal book. Tell me what you guys think I should do or even if I should make the book! I will see ya later!
Bye~
Raphna!