Shadows (An Avengers Fan-Fic)

Chapter 7 - Mind Control or Bipolar Disorder?

(Okay! So this chapter might be a bit confusing so I'm gonna explain it, so skip this part if you want to comprehend it on your own and return if it's too confusing, continue if you want to make sure you know what your reading before you actually read it, so ya, starting now! SPOILER ALERT!!!! Okay, so basically Loki is either Bipolar and you can tell from the color of his eyes changing or he is being controlled by the frost Giants to do his bidding. Also, the reason he knows when his eyes are changing and what color they are is because he kind of has an out of body experience each time they change, but that would be way more confusing. Well, I probably should have written this in 3rd person POV but then you wouldn't hear Loki/possibly controlled or bipolar Loki talking to himself. Also, I'd say this is an experiment to see if this kind of writing is an interesting change, something that already existed, or all out confusing like I'm worried it might be!!! So ya, on with the story unless you've already read it!!

*Recap*

"G-give it back..." I struggled, grabbing at the dangling amulet before my as the the man who stole it, Loki, looked taken aback. Slowly, my consciousness began to waver as blood came gushing out.

"B-Br-"

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Loki's POV
Panic crossed my face as I watched to girl spitting up blood. How was this amulet connected to her life? Questions flooded into my mind as I watched the girl, an emotionless face painted across my face as all I could do was watch from my mind. "G-Give it back..." She coked out, her face turning a tint of blue as her lungs were flooded by the drink of death... Blood. Her arm reached out, over and over again in attempt to grab the dangling amulet as her life depended on it. My face morphed into one of shock as I watched, her life metaphorically dangling by a thread. Why was I so intrigued by this mortal, she did indeed steal this amulet from me, but for what reason? Was it even her who stole it, or someone gave it to her? My mind rampaged on as my eyes flickers from a crystal blue to green, however the girl seemed unaware at my attempt of gaining control of myself as she let out an odd sound before falling harshly onto the thin hospital bed. My eyes turned green as I looked at her, tears falling from my eyes as I rest the amulet over her head, quickly pressing a button to call a doctor before I lost control again. My eyes turned back to a cold blue, my face morphing itself into anger as I saw the girl, amulet resting upon her chest once again and a blinking red light, calling forth the doctors. I turned to take my leave, eyes throwing daggers at the girl as her chest began to inflate and deflate again. "I'll be back.." I whispered more to myself then the mortal resting in bed before leaving in a blink of an eye.

(Okay, so what do ya think?! Too confusing like I'm thinking it might be? If it is, I'd advise you to read the authors note at the top, unless you already did and are still confused, leave me your question(s) in the comments and I'll get back to you as soon as I see them!!! Anyways do you think Loki is being mind controlled, or just bipolar (if I'm using the word bipolar wrong let me know, also if I am, I am profusely sorry and you get a gazillion virtual cookies!!!) Also, what do you think of this writing style? Too confusing, already exists, or awesome change!!! Anyways, I'm gonna go before this turns even longer than what I've written!!! Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppp!!!! Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppp!!!! Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppp!!!!
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