Hey everyone. JoelLee0 here. Here is the first chappie :)
Some parts might/could be similar to the original story, I'm not sure but I'll try to write it in my own style.
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A car approaches the deadly Death Falls, a town surrounded by darkness and seems to omit a foul, evil aura around the area. Inside the vehicle are the Shaun family with their pet dog and cat and their real estate agent, Cameron Daves, going to examine their new home. The Shaun family consists of Pete and Betty Shaun (Mr and Mrs Shaun), Adam Shaun and Rosaline Shaun (Mr and Mrs Shaun's children) and Boney and Kat (their pet dog and cat). Adam, Rosaline, Boney and Kat feels very uncomfortable being in Death Falls and has a really bad feeling about it. Despite now being the summer season and furthermore in the afternoon, the whole place is covered in darkness with just few dim lamp posts to look around. There are also huge and ghastly dead trees around the whole town and creepy vines binded around the houses. The whole trip was quite silent as Mr Daves barely made any conversation. So the Shaun family just viewed the environment of Death Falls as they are now going to stay here.
Eventually they reached their house and it is not any better than the houses they have seen. In fact, it looks more spooky and vile than the others. The children and pets were spooked out by the house's sight and had goosebumps or shivered in fear while the adults were fine with the appearance of the house.
"Wow. It seems we need to clean up our house especially all those vines growing on our home, to make it more lively" Betty exclaimed.
"Uhm... Ehh... Thr.. There is no point in doing so, Mrs Shaun. So... So sorry for not telling you earlier but it is part of Death Falls culture." He stuttered nervously.
"Oh, ok then. No problem, we will just leave it then. Don't want to ruin the culture and upset the residents here especially since we have just moved in." Pete said with a slight bit of relief as if they needed to clean up, he will be doing most of the work which he did not want to do.
Mr Daves just nodded and the children have this feeling that he is hiding something from them and didn't like this at all by one bit.
The children glimpsed back at their new house and noticed that the front door appeared really diabolic and the windows look like fierce and nasty looking eyes glaring at them. They shivered back a few steps in fear and their backs made contact with something rough and so cold to the touch, they felt like a ghost had just touched them. They jumped forward petrified and just realized they had just ended onto the trunk of this gigantic but one of the blackest trees they have ever seen and a dark aura seemed to spread all around it.
While Adam was examining the tree, Rosaline saw on the tip of her eye a shadow at the doorway. She turned to look at the doorway and she sees a young girl younger than her standing there. She felt really frightened and quickly walks back to Adam. It was not the sudden appearance of the girl there that scared Rosaline but how she looked. The young girl was wearing ragged clothes covered in blood and her hair was all messed up and in all directions. The scariest part was Rosaline saw worms and maggots crawling around the girl's face and that girl had a shocking pale white face. Rosaline looked back to see the girl still there but now with this creepy smile and she opened her mouth to reveal sharp fangs in her mouth. Rosaline screamed and quickly ran to Adam. Adam heard her scream and turned around.
"What's the matter, Rosaline? You nearly gave me a heart attack with your scream." Adam said in a panic tone.
"Look at the doorway, there is this demonic girl there and there are insects crawling on her face and she's got fangs as teeth." Rosaline said in a fast paced and timid voice.
He glanced at the doorway but only saw darkness there. "I don't see anything there, sis." He answered.
She turned around and indeed that girl was gone.
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Dun... Dun... Dduunnn... Oo, scary. Hahha.
Anyway, hope y'all guys are liking it, I'm not the best writer yo. Anyway, sorry if this chapter is kinda boring, will be more exciting later.
What will happen to the Shaun family, will Rosaline meet that girl again or maybe all of them will...
Are all the residents of Death Falls somewhat like that?
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All of you who read this, please vote and send some positive comments. Can also do some recommendations or similar info that you request... I will look through and see whether it will work. :D
Anyway, I'm planning to shorten Rosaline to Rose, maybe and use more of Mr & Mrs Shaun rather than Pete and Betty.
Tell me whether you guys don't mind or say something if you don't want or like it.
If there be no comments, I'll just take that as you don't mind.
*Added info-I want & hope to reach up to at least 5 reads and maybe few comments, if not there really is no point for me to continue. So please read and comment. Thanks. Sorry if I sound harsh/too forceful but I also need people to read/comment/vote or whatever.
Anyway, Joel (AngelicMetalWolfX777) out.
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FanfictionWhen the Shaun famiy arrives at Death Falls to stay there, everyone had a bad feeling about this area except the parents. The whole place seemed too spooky and had an evil aura spreading around. They reached their house and it's no better. Ghastly t...
