Mrs. Loud: What happened here?
Lincoln: We had an epic tickle fight.
Mrs. Loud: I thought so. Need some help with the stomach rubs?
Lana: Totally!!
Mrs. Loud: Ok. I'll start with you, Lana.
Lana: Okay.
(Mrs. Loud walks over to Lana and starts rubbing her stomach)
Mrs. Loud: Does that feel good?
Lana: It feels great, Mom!
Mrs. Loud: Now for the fun part
(She pulls up Lana's shirt and starts rubbing her belly button)
Lana: *giggles* It tickles.
Mrs. Loud: I bet it does.
(She finishes rubbing Lana's belly button)
Mrs. Loud: Who's next?
Lincoln: Me!
Mrs. Loud: Ok Lincoln. Come on up.
(Lincoln comes up and lays down as Mrs. Loud pulls up his shirt and starts rubbing)
Mrs. Loud: Does that feel good, Lincoln?
Lincoln: *laughs* Yes it does.
Mrs. Loud: Ok. Now it's time to rub your belly button
(She rubs Lincoln's belly button and eventually finishes)
Mrs. Loud: Who's next?
(Lynn comes up and pushes Lincoln out of the way)
Lynn: Move over, bro. It's my turn.
Mrs. Loud: Ok Lynn.
(She pulls up Lynn's shirt and sees that her stomach is really red)
Mrs. Loud: How did your stomach get so red?
Lynn: It's red because of Lori.
Mrs. Loud: Ok.
(She starts rubbing Lynn's stomach)
Mrs. Loud: Does that feel good?
Lynn: Ah. That's the stuff.
Mrs. Loud: Now to rub your belly button
(She rubs Lynn's belly button and eventually finishes as Luna comes up)
Mrs. Loud: Ok Luna. Are you ready?
Luna: Totally, Mom!
(Mrs. Loud pulls up Luna's shirt and starts rubbing)
Mrs. Loud: Does that feel good?
Luna: Ah. That feels rockin'.
Mrs. Loud: That's good.
(She starts rubbing Luna's belly button)
Mrs. Loud: Did your boyfriend get in the fight as well?
Luna: *blushes* Hahaha. Yes he did.
Mrs. Loud: Ok. Let's have him come up next.
(She finishes rubbing Luna's stomach as BJ comes up)
BJ: I think I got tickled way worse than Luna.
Mrs. Loud: Awww don't worry, sweetie. I'll fix it.
(As BJ lays down, Mrs. Loud pulls up his shirt and starts rubbing his stomach)
BJ: Thanks.
Mrs. Loud: How does that feel?
BJ: It feels amazing.
(Mrs. Loud starts rubbing BJ's belly button)
BJ: That's the stuff.
(After BJ is done, Lucy comes out of nowhere)
Lucy: I'll be next.
Mrs. Loud: Ok Lucy. Just come here and lay down
(Lucy lays down as Mrs. Loud pulls up her shirt and starts rubbing)
Mrs. Loud: Does that feel good?
Lucy: SIGH. That feels amazing.
Mrs. Loud: That's good. Now I'm going to rub your belly button.
(She starts rubbing Lucy's belly button)
Lucy: SIGH. That feels amazing too.
(Mrs. Loud finishes rubbing Lucy's stomach)
Mrs. Loud: Ok. Who's next?
(Lisa comes up)
Lisa: I suppose I am next for the comforting of the stomach.
Mrs. Loud: Ok Lisa. Let's see how badly your stomach got it.
(She pulls up Lisa's shirt and starts rubbing)
Mrs. Loud: Does that feel good?
Lisa: Ahhh. Yes. Very precise rubbing. Great job, Mom.
Mrs. Loud: Thanks, sweetie.
(She starts rubbing Lisa's belly button)
Lisa: That feels even better! I'll have to do an experiment on this sometime.
(Mrs. Loud finishes rubbing Lisa's stomach)
Mrs. Loud: Ok. Who's next?
(Luan comes up)
Luan: I believe it's me.
Mrs. Loud: Okay lay down, sweetie.
(Luan lays down as Mrs. Loud pulls up her shirt and starts rubbing)
Mrs. Loud: How does that feel, Luan?
Luan: It feels so pun-derful.
Mrs. Loud: Good one, dear.
(She starts rubbing Luan's belly button)
Luan: That feels even more pun-derful
(Mrs. Loud laughs at the joke and finishes rubbing Luan's stomach)
Luan: Thanks, Mom.
Mrs. Loud: You're welcome. Who's next?
(Lola comes up)
Lola: I'll be next.
Mrs. Loud: Okay, princess. Now lay down.
(Lola lays down as Mrs. Loud pulls up her dress and starts rubbing)
Lola: That feels amazing, Mom.
(Mrs. Loud rubs Lola's belly button)
Lola: Now that's the stuff.
(Mrs. Loud finishes rubbing Lola's stomach as Leni comes up)
Mrs. Loud: Who's next?
Leni: It's me.
Mrs. Loud: Ok Leni. Lay down, dear.
(Leni lays down as Mrs. Loud pulls up her dress and starts rubbing)
Leni: That feels good.
(Mrs. Loud rubs Leni's belly button)
Leni: That feels even better.
(Mrs. Loud finishes rubbing Leni's stomach just as Lori comes up)
Mrs. Loud: Hey Lori. Are you next?
Lori: Yeah. I'm like literally the last one.
Mrs. Loud: Alright then! Lay down, hun
(Lori lays down as Mrs. Loud pulls up her shirt and starts rubbing)
Lori: That literally feels amazing
(Mrs. Loud starts rubbing Lori's belly button)
Lori: *giggles* Now this feels great but it tickles a little.
Mrs. Loud: I bet it does.
(She finishes rubbing Lori's stomach)
Lori: That was literally great.
Mrs. Loud: Well, that's everyone.
Luna: Yep. I think I'm gonna go lay down with BJ.
Mrs. Loud: Ok, dear.
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The Loud Tales and Haven Tales: Rejected Scenes
FanfictionA series of rejected scenes from my flagship series called Haven Tales both before and after the rebrand.