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The purpose of this book is to...well it's pretty obvious, but I'll explain it anyways. I have decided since I've gotten so much support on my book "Betrayal is Inevitable", that I'd return the favor to all of you lovely...
Recommended for : Readers that love the essence of mystery with seriously thought out action scenes!
What I liked : I really like the mystery of Jennifer and the prison which is not revealed to us all at once but through the conversation of William and James. I also like how you ended the introduction {btw I preferred the first one, It had nicer flow and vivid descriptions} it repeated the first line and adds intensity. I wasn't worrying about grammar as I didn't spot any making it an enjoyable read. You had me at the edge of my chair and hooked in the first chapter. It's one of the best I've read so far! I love the fight scene between Jennifer's clone and James, the idea of the blood clone was amazing and I've taken a lot of interest from that small scene, I look forward to reading more scenes like that and solving the mystery of Jennifer and the girl from the introduction ^.^
What I feel could improve : Well, the part when you write (oh yeah, did I tell you...) seemed to break the flow of the story. I suggest writing that small story without the brackets and 'oh yeah.' So that the readers feel like they're in the story, not as if they are being read to. Readers love feeling like they're in a story rather than feeling that the story is being told to them ( Not sure if this makes sense, but yeah).
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Through the eyes of his Bully {Editing}
Status: Complete
Genre: Short Story
Description: "People are alway's told to stand up for themselves, but, it isn't always that easy."
From the series : "Through their eyes."
Jade Smith consider's her meeting with Aaron Phillips as one of worst events that has ever occurred in her school life. She is determined to keep him away from her, even if it includes a few punches and insults that could easily hurt.
However, a strong connection causes her to get closer to him and not in the way you're thinking. Nope. Nah ah.
This isn't a love story, nor is it a story about love. It's a story about reality.
Started on : 09.05.16 Finished on : 24.05.16 Hit 1K on : 06.06.15
"Well-written, exploring some interesting themes and catching. Thank you for this!" -@unknownfamousauthor-
"I love the emotions and feelings portrayed from Jade's POV " - @LadybirdCookie-
"Its so very interesting and tense, keeps you on edge, good job." -@AshDkay-
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Can you hear me, now? #Wattys2016
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Originally called 'the free spirit who needed a little love.' Book 1 from the series 'Broken spirits.'
"Hey, can you hear me? No?"
Sapphire Kingshaw is neglected out of the spotlight and retained in the shadows of her older brother and younger sister. She is 'an unnoticed free, flower spirit just waiting for the right time to to bloom,' as her grandmother had once told her.
And of course, Sapphire's age of blooming arrives as a new, magical adventure jumps into Sapphire's life, causing her to take on the huge responsibility as the fairy of hope and love, promising to not leave alone a single, lonely soul she crosses. Her job is to make those that are disrupted by envy and hate, learn to love again and have hope.
But, what if Sapphire is the one who needs a little love and hope?
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Rises and Thorns
Genre: Fantasy
Description: A re-tale of sleeping beauty with a modern twist.
In a small room, surrounded by people she felt no close connection to, Rosetta is told that her whole life had been a lie. From her first words, to her first steps and to her recent breath, she had been living a lie, only to be told by a group of strangers that she is a princess and not just any princess, but a princess with a curse, an unknown curse.
Now, she spends her time fighting super villians, sustaining relationships and searching for the truth in her life shrouded by lies. Because every lie starts with a truth, right?
Cover made by : QueenOfHoen15
Rewritten version of 'Spiritans of Arcana : Rosetta Colburn.'
