Art of Anesthesia (Ticci Toby)

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Title: Art of Anesthesia
Author: xXWolfloveXx
Type: Fanfiction/Romance/Horror
Series Update: Ongoing

Review:
So far the story is great and interesting. There is a lot of great word choice and a lot of details. The details may need slightly more work, but overall they are great.

Also what I noticed in this book, she didn't use many cliches that a lot CreepyPasta fanfics use such as the parents died, abuse the main character, and so forth. She actually has given the parents spot light and actually be happy caring parents. It's a nice change of space which I think is good.

Grammar errors are apparent, but I believe not that many to be noticeable. She does a good job overlooking her work or at least coming back to edit it.

The story has a lot of potential and I would love to see this book get more recognition than it already has. Support the author by just checking it out or maybe even voting or commenting.

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