Not Your Average Cinderella ( One Direction ) |COMPLETED WITH NEW ENDING

Chapter 9

I gasped. No no why? I could feel the tears trying to fight there way out.

"Why do you have to go," said Louis. I stopped trying to get my hand out of his grasp.

"Look I just have too. I'm not even suppose to be here," I said. Louis loosened his grip making it my chance to run. I looked him in the eye and ran picking up my dress to go faster.

"Rachel!" I yelled trying to find her.

"Rachel!!" I yelled again as loud as I could.

"What," she said pushing her way through the crowd of people.

"We have to go now," I said. She looked at me with confusion.

"Why? We are having so much fun," she said.

"I'll tell you later let's just go hurry," I said grabbing her hand and pushing her through the crowd. Once we got to the car we took off our masks. I was about to take off my shoes when I saw one was missing. When did this turn into a Cinderella story? Rachel noticed and she looked at me straight in the eye.

"You have been crying. What happened," she said keeping her eyes on the road now.

"Ok here it goes. I met a guy and he was so sweet and funny and nice. He asked me to dance and we did. It was nice and then we kissed. I was nice and it felt right. It had passion. The midnight bell rang and I knew I had to leave. He tried to stop, but I told him I had to go. Then...," I hesitated. "He took off his mask. It was Louis, Rachel. Louis Tomlinson," I started to cry.

'Why you sad about that? He's famous and super cute," she said trying to cheer me up.

"Hey! He's mine. Anyway who were you dancing with anyway," I said. She smiled at the road.

"No one special," she said. She's hiding something. I can tell.

"Oh come on tell me. I'm like your best friend," I said. She smiled again at the road.

"Ok. It was no one special just Niall freakin James Horan!" she said. I started laughing. Niall was here favorite. She knows everything about. Its a bit weird, but that is what I like about her.

"So does he know it's you," I said trying to get her mind of me and Louis.

"Of course! I told him right after we like made out. And then he told me he was Niall," she said right as she pulled into my houses driveway.

"Well thanks for the night," I said closing the door and walking to the front door. Rachel rolled down her window.

"No problem. See you tomorrow," she said pulling out of the driveway and driving off. I sighed and unlocked the door. It was quiet and making me sleepy. I walked to the living room to find someone in there.

"Wow! You look beautiful. Did you go to the party," asked Harry.

***Authors Note***

Sorry for the late update. I had middle of the year testing and it was so boring. But now I'm back and made you guys this chapter. Ok so I anyone excited for 1DDay!!!! IM LIKE FREAKING OUT!!! I can't wait! Well I have to go. Keep on commenting and voting. And keep tellin your friends to read my fanfic! Love Y'all! Next update will be Sunday!