Hi again guys! Sorry, I sorta' left you at a cliff hanger at the end of that last story. I meant to. I'm mean >:) I'd leave you to try and guess who the weird guy at the end of 'He Comes' is but, it is pretty obvious. Zalgo. Well, Zalgo possessing someone... But yeah. Bottom line, I'd like some feedback. Do you like the way I portrayed all the characters? Is there anything you would change, take out, or add? It is too late to change much, but... I sorta just want to know what you think. Also, here is an update on who all is in the mansion. Or... Was. :)
Jeff the Killer
Slenderman
Mr. Widemouth
Seedeater
Smile Dog
BEN Drowned
Laughing Jack
Eyeless Jack
Ticci Toby
Masky
Hoodie
The Rake
Sonic.EXE
BRVR
Glitchy Red
Herobrine
Lost Silver
Sally
MARIO
Tails Doll
Is that all? Sorry, I'm having a brain fart right now. Either way, now is a really good time to suggest some Creepypastas to add to the scene. By the way, I apologize, but I think I'm only going to do OC Creepypastas if they are well known. Sorry. It isn't that I dislike any of your OCs, its just that... I dunno. Just, don't send me your OCs, please. I'm not trying to be an ass when I say that, as I'm sure you have respectable OCs. Anyway, moving on. I've had lots of fun reading this, and I look forward to continuing it. I already have the continued plot in my head... I just need to write it down. I think I'm going to split it into two parts... :/ Well maybe not the whole plot down XD I hope you enjoy it, nevertheless. Thanks for commenting, if you do, and if you don't, thanks for reading. GP out!
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Creepypasta: The Story
FanfictionThis is a story, of which I hope to eventually make a reasonable length, of the Creepypasta characters. Keep in mind, this is my view of it, likely it will not exactly match up with yours. It could very well include characters from Slenderseries als...
