(Here's chapter 2 and agin I'm sorry that I have to do this I just hope that this time it doesn't delete anything. Anyways here's chapter 2, I've been up all nite working on these so plz enjoy. Thank you Nd plz tell others to read my story that:))
-------Louis P.O.V-------
"She said she didn't like the band I'm in do I tell her that I'm part of the band or not. I mean it seems to me that she likes me" I was thinking this inside my head. She beautiful, and her smile is so amazing, and those beautiful green eyes are like, wow! It's hard to explain her beauty except that's she's the most beautiful girl I've ever seen!
"No who are you?" She asked me smiling at me.
"My name is Louis" I told her very excited and acted like myself when I said it.
"Louis what?" She said.
"Tomlinson, Louis Tomlinson. But if you want love you can call me Lou." I told her with a funny smile to get her to laugh.
When I looked at her smile was gone. She looked disappointed or something.
"What's wrong love?" I asked her.
"If my friends taught me one thing your from that one band, and your calling me love now I've heard them talk bout you saying that you have a girlfriend who's really pretty by the way, and way prettier than me, cause I'm not pretty. And don't get me wrong but to me it seems like you are hitting on me. Or do you call every girl you meet,"love"?"
"Well no I call every girl love. I'm not hitting on you but I would like to get to know you better cause I mean don't get me wrong but you are very beautiful girl." I told her.
Then we were at the hospital.
-------Becca's P.O.V-------
When Louis told me his whole name my happiness changed that instant. Cause I mean he was from a band I didn't like and I mean it sounded like he was hitting on me. When I explained what I was thinking he's responded shocked me.
When we reach the hospital. I was never so relieved in my life I tried to get out of the car when something grabbed my shoulder.
"You sit. I will open the door for you love." He told me.
"No, no it's fine I don't need help, and please stop calling me that I'm not your love remember. Eleanor is." I told him. Before I knew it he was at my door. He opened it and held out a hand I grabbed it and he helped me. But that's when I got sick on the side walk walking into the hospital.
"Well it looks like you have a minor injury.." The doctor said before getting cut off my Louis.
"So she's going to be fine?" Louis asked the doctor.
"Get out" the doctor told him.
"Oh sorry." Louis said.
"Anyways it's just a concussion. All you need to do is put some ice on it and get some rest." The doctor told me.
"But why did I feel sick?" I asked him.
"It was probably from meeting that weirdo." He told me smiling
I smiled to.
"I can still hear you guys you know." Louis said.
"No you can"t" I told him laughing.
Then louis came in while the doctor went to go get me an ice pack. And he kissed my forehead.
"What are you doing?" I asked.
"Kissing your booboo." He told me smiling his adorable smile.
I couldn't help but smile.
His phone started ringing, and he just stood there like there was nothing going on.
"Aren't you gonna answer that?" I said snapping him out of it.
He help his pointer finger up I guess telling me to hang on a minute. I'm thinking, "ya like I'm going anywhere."
-------Harry's P.O.V-------
"Where's Lou this time?" I said at StarBucks.
"Hazza, I really don't know but can we please eat I'm starving!" Niall said.
"Niall,your always hungry." Liam told him.
"Maybe Lou is heading here now I don't know." Zayn said.
"Why don't you text him, I'm hungry!" Niall said.
"Niall." Liam said.
"Ya buddy?"Niall responded.
"Shut up." Liam replied.
To Lou:- Hey buddy where are you it 9 o,clock?!
-------Louis's P.O.V-------
From Hazza:- Hey buddy where are you it's 9 o'clock?!
Oh no I forgot. I guess thinking so much about a girl I don't even know that well I forgot all about breakfast!
To Hazza:- On my way. See you lads soon.
"Ok before I take you to where your living I have to make one minor stop.
-------Becca's P.O.V-------
"Oh yay a minor stop" I was thinking where the heck it this guy taking me?
"Where are we going?"
"To get coffee."
"Please tell me this isn't going to be like a date cause I mean I'm not interested and you have a girlfriend."
"Ok honestly I can't tell you and are you saying that if I didn't have a girlfriend you would date me?"
"NO! I've told you a million times I don't like you!"
"Alright I it looks like...." He was cut off by a cat in the middle of the road.
"Stupid pussycat." He said laughing. I laughed with him.
Then we arrived at StarBucks. And he told me to close my eyes so I did and he lead me into the café and sat me down at a table. All I could hear we're voices.
"Who is she?"
"She's beautiful."
"Why did Lou bring her here?"
"Ok Louis is this a joke or can I see where I'm at."
"Just stand there and keep your eyes closed."
"Woof" I said putting my hands up to my face and chest area cupping them down.
"Just stay"
"Alright"
I opened my eyes all I could see was the rest of One Direction. When I saw them my smile quickly vanished.
-------Niall's P.O.V-------
I thought to myself," dang is she beautiful, how did Louis fine this beautiful lady?"
"So what's your name love?" I asked.
-------Liam, Zayn, and Harry's P.O.V-------
"Ya what is your name love?" We all asked her.
-------Louis's P.O.V-------
I tired to cut them off but it didn't work. I even did a silly dance and everything. But they wouldn't look at me at all.
(Sorry if this chapter is short. but ill try to work on chapter 3 soon I promise. I hope you guys are enjoying it.)
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StarStruck (a Louis Tomlinson fan fic)
FanfictionA girl named Becca goes on a vacation to London for the whole summer and leaves her friends in Kansas behind. But she hates One Direction.. What she didn't know while she was in vacation was that she would meet one of them or all of them. Or maybe e...
