SuperBatman4s 31 day Challenge

Day 13

Day 13: Re-write yesterdays piece. You need good grammar again. It can be really short. Why? Because you can't reuse any adjectives you used yesterday (describing words).

Daisy sat on the windowsill and looked roundabout the place. She was trying to get round her appearance which meant she was spending a lot of time in front of the mirror her, hair, she couldn't comb. Her body was different so she fell over herself, the thing that hadn't changed was that her eyes still were brown but the thing she couldn't get over was the amount of hormones she was now experiencing and the urge to laugh in places at times usually in jokes involving blonds, like her.

Or him.

Whatever she didn't know how to describe herself anymore and it was getting on her nerves and since the person she could talk to was a guy with the girl problem, she felt like it didn't count as he had enough on his plate without dollops from her.

She had decided it was the boy thing to blame how she was feeling at the time and the thingamabob that was going on with her body. She was thinking about giving up and failing. So she picked her mobile up and gave Dougle a call she needed support now and she was gonna get it.

Understand it now? It was better with adjectives which I just scrapped.