Online (extended version)

Thoughts

One thing that I'm finding essential, is feedback from readers. Conversing with readers and getting to find out what they thought, what they liked and didn't like, what they expected when they took up reading my stories, all contributes to the success of the writer. I have actually been able to tweak parts of this story to make it more enjoyable, more engaging, and more compelling just from learning these things from a few people that read, Online.

So, my questions to you are, "What did you think the story would be about when you first decided to read it?" What are your thoughts about it now that you have finished it?" "Did you enjoy it?" "Did it meet or exceed your expectations?" "Good or bad, what stood out in the story and why?" "What do you prefer to see or not see in stories like this?" "Do you have any questions or other comments for me?"

Thanks for taking the time to read my story and letting me know your thoughts.